Awesome chappie! Though please update soon!

Write more please it has a good plot line.

that's verry cool

1) AWESOME!

2) I laughed at the 'just because he has those stupis shoes' line.

3) I practically wanted to gag when I read that Nossida grabbed her hand and kissed it. I still do.

4) Well, at least she's alive!

5) AWESOME CHAPTER!

Wow... YOU ACTUALLY BROUGHT THEM IN THE STORY!

I was like, Chaos Emeralds? What the heck are they doing here? Oh wait, this is YOU!

Anyway, awesome chapter! I SO agree with Danny! Malls are horrible! XD

Thanks for updating!

Sounds cool

You just had to put Christopher Thorndyke didn't ya? GREAT NAME! He's my favorite next to Sonic in Sonic X.

I also love their fight, it was fun to read! Thanks for the update!

...Oh, I get it it now, they think each other as family, not actually blood family.

Best bet would be to break that down before the whole feeling part or it would just be, like weird and wrong.

I like the idea of it.