My first thought when I read the Greece/America part of the chapter was exactly your words at the end of it: YUUUHUUUU, GO HERACLES!
Heracles is just perfect and I so ship Giripan! I also love the idea in this story, that Kiku comes out of a disastous relationship with Alfred. Can't wait to read the rest!

run kiku ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!

Aw, this was cute, I loved it! You'll all have to forgive me, but regardless of the fact that I'm American, I've never much liked Alfred. It was... dementedly refreshing to see him be abandoned in the somber streets of Paris, I'm not going to lie...

I'm glad I ran into this, it was sweet. I haven't peeked around for a sequel, but if there isn't one, I would highly recommend you consider it! I, for one, love to read about the silly little struggles that Hercules and Sediq go through just to compete over poor little Kiku, so you can count on at least one reader!

I definitely wasn't expecting FrUk, but hey, it was a pleasant surprise! Oh, and thank you so very much for minding spelling, grammar, punctuation, capitalization, all that jazz. I'm not going to say it was flawless, but typos are a thing and I'm not going to get on your back for that, that's just kind of rude! That aside, yes, the effort is acknowledged and appreciated to the utmost extent.

Oh. A couple things that I REALLY really liked: it being gradual. Love doesn't sprout and bloom overnight. Also, the way that England wasn't convinced that France legitimately loved him, also a very touchy topic for that particular pairing that can be taken in countless ways, I'm just glad you picked a path that had an ending.

Is it weird? I never much thought of Hercules as being much a protective boyfriend, but I guess that sounds pretty stupid looking back on the anime. That just goes for, thank you for reminding me, I forget these things and I have a feeling I'm not the only one. I'm glad that you were able to get him to portray that side of him, I like that a lot.

Hum dee dum. Okay. I'm sorry if this turned out to be a bit of a novel.

Speaking of novels! I have read quite a few Greece/Japan fanfictions, this one has been the best, no joke.

Okay, better stop wasting time. I'm off, and great job one more time, I look forward to reading a sequel! :)
-DCI

xD Turkey is freaking nuts~

wonderful story! i love the ending, there could b a sequel someday... i really hope there is! but if not i cant wait to see what else you will write!

ahhhh!~

This is an amazing story so far.

Sad, but also really amazing!

I love it!

please makes seekwil PLEEZ XD SERIOSLY I NEEDZ SEEKWIL...wel no i downt...but...hey! XD

good job...when's the sequel?

naruxhinacrazy

NO! (sory, I LOVE FranceXCanada!) KIKU!

GOAH! Alfred is a jerk in this chapter! D:

Poor KIKU! D; H-how could Alfred!

woah.

Greece can shoved America back to the wall. that's mean he is awesome.

America is a perfect a s s

love this. so very angst. OMG~

*sniffs the air* I smell sequel indeed! but if this sequel realy breaks up the couples you have now... i will forever be depressed. Breaking up those perfect couples with demolish meh D: Oh and I do love Sadiq to a point...the only reason i like him is becuase him and Heracles fight over little Kiku. Other than that I don't really like him at all :)

Hi,

That was a very nice story. The charcters' feelings were dealt with in a very nice and accurate way, especially Heracles x Kiku and Francis x Arthur (although maybe it would have been even nicer if you'd given them a little bit more time to really show the evolution of their feelings).

Good luck with your next fictions, anyway.

~ .Obsi

Yay, happy ending! 3 Amazing job!

V.