It was great while it lasted...

Cant wait for the rest to come out, please update soon.

I'm sorry what do yo mean by Co. I'm not British or American :D I don't know Grey probably is the only character I wanted to love but couldn't. Because he'd suffered so much but had no idea what Jack had gone through, and he didn't even care.

Your writing is good.

I won't be reading on as this seems to be another OC story which all seem to be Mary-Sues but the story was pretty good from what I read. I'll check out your other stories for a non-OC fic.

this story is soo cool pleaase carry on please

really good story. Torchwood and doctor who in the same place, brilliant :) please update soon!

and thank you for it

I always thought that if jack REALLY LOVED ianto he would actually fall to pieces and NOT for just 6 months...and he WOULD keep his promise to remember ianto even after 10 years.

One of the reasons I would have loved to beat RTD over the head after the alonzo thing..in dw's end of time...!

unless he was using alonzo to get back to earth..(shrugs) then I could understand it...!

so YES thank you for giving jack back his ianto and steven

That was very...sexy with the blindfold. I love reading pieces that bring Ianto back to life if done right. This was done right.

Beautiful chapter and the song lyrics was priceless!

I am now giving YOU the title of Big Blue Meanie (BBM for short). I last bestowed this title on deetatarrant because she kept hurting Ianto and kept us readers hanging at pivotal moments as well. GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP! I want some REAL Janto finally! And don't forget the little guy - Steven!

Great story, by the way! Hope everything goes the way Liz sees it...

Darque

I really enjoyed this chapter, possibly the bet of all of them. I like how you included the literature and the whole undercover school girl thing is really cool!

PLZ update asap!

Glad that Jack got some proof about the existence beyond death and comfort from his love, but not sure what he was doing in the last scene there.

Two and a half hankies.

Well a little unhappy with Liz being so prominent in the story seeing as she is an OC bordering on Mary Sue, but the Jack, Gwen and Rhys bits have been good.