So good... so very good. Thank you.

I really liked this, it had a good rhythm (no pun intended!) Well Written too. ~DoobreyFerkin~ lol :-) x

Wow I think you really captured the essence of the realization of what the Time Lords had done to the Master well. I know I cannot ever see him in the same light again knowing they caused his madness over all the years - and it's sad too it's because of them animosity rose up between him and the Doctor. Oh can you imagine what those two would have been like if they could have traveled the universe together as brothers instead of battling one another everytime they met?

Bravo!

aaw its so sweet

Aw! that ending was adorable! great story :)

I love love love love love love love it!

This seems a bit out of place though: "I could only stare at the space where he had stood and wished I’d had the courage to say it.

Four words I had wanted to.

I forgive you, friend."

Seeing as he says he forgives him in the series 3 finale. But then, I guess he's forgiving him for something else this time.

Anyway it was brilliant!

Wow! Amazingly, I didn't cry during The End of Time, but your fic brought the tears to my eyes! I thought that scene was great, there was so much unsaid going on there, and I'm glad that you took the time to try and fill in some of the blanks! Thanks!

Just as I thought when I saw the last part of the episode. Excellent ! :)

Aww... :'( I really enjoyed this! Great work!