Very nice! :-) I stumbled across the movie again the other day, and after that I thought I’d see what kind of stories were out there. This is just the kind of thing that I like — detailed, realistic (as it were :-P), well-written. Your characters were good, and I am a big fan of your decisions re: leadership. I too think that not only would it be awkward and somewhat inappropriate for a non-na’vi to be their everyday leader (as opposed to their battle leader), but that Jake himself would be quite cognizant of that. Neytiri will make an excellent leader.

Anyhoo ... very enjoyable, thx for writing!

Awesome story

How do you know that the leader of the sea clan is called Ohute?

I absolutely loved this story. This was a great interpretation of the events unfolding after the great battle. I highly recommend this to all AVATAR enthusiasts.

Thank you so much for your time spent on this FanFic. I look forward to reading your future work.

Great extension. :D!

Woah, it is AWESOME to trip over a great story that is already completed! :D

Great way to finish the story, with Neytiri as chief. I'm not entirely sure what Jak is in charge of? Normal warrior human liason with a side of moonshine-making?

And man, 'For Science!' is the greatest drinking call EVER.

Thats for writing and posting this thoroughly enjoyable ficlet!

Love it.

it's realy good so far, i think i may be an adict... . .

I wanted to send you a PM but I didn't see the option available on your profile. I think you should be aware that you and several other authors have been plagiarized. Bits of your lovely story plus several others have been copied and pasted into "Only Hope is left", without credit given where it is due.

I think it is important that people be aware when their work is being used and claimed by another, even when it's fanfiction.

Hey, AL.

I love this fic. So much. I've probably read it about a half dozen times, which makes the fact that I just noticed this very embarrassing: After the first page break of this chapter, you refer to the scientist as 'Rick Sjogren', which is consistent with the rest of his appearances as well as with the chapter previous. But about 8 paragraphs in (including dialogue), it says 'Nick Sjogren'. It's a little thing, I know, and probably due to spell-check, the evil glitchy thing, but your story has such a wonderful attention to canonical and logical detail that I think it deserves to have the small typing details to be pointed out by readers, yanno? Which I mean in no affront to you or any beta readers you might have. :)

Sorry for bothering you! (Since this can't be said enough though: adore your story! A wonderfully long 'missing scene' fix. ;) )

It was amazing to read your fanfic. I realy liked the details and the reading between the rows.

Ever thought about to write the whole Movie from scratch as a Book? It would be a pleasure to read this.

***** 5 Stars from me ;)

Oh WOW, What an Ending and Epilogue! Great Chaper to boot. :-))))))

Thanks for all the effort you put into this great story.

Thanks for all the effort you put into this great story.

I completed your fanfiction within a few hours, and I must tell you how much I enjoyed it. I'm so glad that Trudy lived ! Haha!