Wow! I'm speechless.

Short, but utterly perfect.
~Jen

That is one of my favorite photos of him... I liked this, it was very 'real' :)

Good story.

that was really intense.

Oh, Ms. Kathy! This is so perfect. As always, you capture emotions so they are crystal clear. Love, anger, hate, reconciliation, all razor sharp and compelling.

I hope she gets some Lexapro - I know it helped me!

Thank you for sharing.

wow! this was beautiful! and sad but very hopeful... is she depressed? I can sort of relate to her... really, really good! Thanks honey!

Sad to say, Edward and Bella are normal people not without mistakes after all. A nice read... thank you.

This was beautiful :)

powerful in so litte

That's really great for such a short work. Thanks for sharing your writing with the rest of us. I don't know when the contest is but I wish you the best of luck.

Such a way with words and so few words at that.

The ‘realness’ of the piece touched me, because let’s be honest we’ve all been there or somewhere close.

Your work is always a delight to read.

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You sure know how to pack an emotional wallop! That has to be one of the most beautifully written pieces EVER. You managed to convey such depth and honesty in so few words. I was instantly drawn in, concerned, and hopeful. You always leave me begging for more. You really are one amazingly talented woman!

Thank you!

*heartclench* As always, it's so realistic...true to life...tangible. I like that you addressed a problem that so many couples face, but retained their need for one another through the suffering. So sad, but the dash of hope was the perfect ending. Well done )