Great story!

she was too easily convinced, unless she really did love him back

Hehehe...of all the things Sarah should concern about, she choose the well-being of her plant. Lol.

As much as this story leaves me wanting to read a detailed description of the crystal with a drunk Jareth, the line "Who will water my plants?" nearly compensated for my longing completely.

Loved the storyline, mealt my heart and lifted both ends of my mouth at the same time.

Awwww!

Nice one-shot. "Who will water my plants?"

~Xela

Love this line:

"Everything you've worked for, you did for me," he replied arrogantly, clasping his hands leisurely behind his head as he laid back on the pillow.

Bwahahaha! So Jareth!

The sex was hot especially when she didn't know who it was, lol. it was sweet though in the end.

"Who will water my plants?"

KILLER line XD

And the last sentence is PERFECT, I love this

Aww, Sarah dear, you know that you're losing an argument with the Goblin King when your last line of defence is your poor unwatered plants. That's got to be one of the cutest endings I've seen.

It's interesting to see Sarah throwing a tantrum just to get her anger out of her system and then proceeding in a reasonable way towards Jareth's crystals. A more mature yet still egoistical Jareth is interesting to read too. It's quite an entertaining story.

awww. "who will water my plants?" I love you for that line, it's true genius!

It seems reading through Labyrinth fics here is like a minefield, you never know what you're going to get. I have mostly encountered ones that either were just bloody awful or were decent but had so many grammatical and spelling errors that I couldn't continue.

Yours was one of the few exceptions to that, and for that I thank you.

One typo I wanted to point out, only because this was such a well-written piece, I think you mean level in this sentence, not lever: He stepped up some steps to a higher lever, and continued down another corridor.

Either way, thank you for showing me proof positive there is hope to find well-written fics in this fandom.

I loved reading this story! The whole plot line was great and I liked how you wrote Sarah... she always seems difficult to write. Jareth of course was magnificent, but when is he not? lol

Great job! I'll be checking out some of your other writing. :)

Just loved it :) Although i am kinda surprised Jareth is so jealous that he would have gotten mad earlier, even so great story

Aah! I'm disappointed in myself - I can't believe it took me this long to find this! I'm in love with your Jareth; I think you've captured his character wonderfully. You also did a very classy job with the "love scene." Sarah was on the money, too. Nice job!