| Reviews for Where the Trees meet the Mountains |
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   sgriffin730 chapter 11 . 12/19/2019 its been 10 years but it was good! |
| Scaunders chapter 11 . 5/30/2019 I hope you take up this story again, its very enjoyable |
| chief1256 chapter 11 . 8/14/2018 Hey can you continue this story its really good and I want to know whats going to happen next so pleeeaassss pick up this story again. |
| Moody chapter 11 . 7/16/2018 I love the story can you make more chapters of this one of the best fanfic about the topic |
| prussiasawsomewife2016 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018 please don't use gods name in vain |
| DragonOfTheLost chapter 11 . 4/2/2018 PLEASE, I WILL PAY YOU IF YOU DO(I won't actually pay you), PLEASE CONTINUE |
| DragonOfTheLost chapter 11 . 4/2/2018 CONTINUE IT GODDAMNIT |
| KingCrazy213 chapter 11 . 3/7/2018 I very much enjoy this story and if you could update this story with new chapters I would be very appreciative. |
| HauntingTheNet chapter 11 . 1/6/2018 Great story. Definitely glad I was able to read it, and filled with sorrow that it ended when it did without any new excerpts in the last seven years. It could use a rewrite though to fix overlooked errors. Things such as misusing the word "arraigned" when you meant the word "arranged" for example. But especially the huge error in chapter one. The one where you mistakenly stated in the treaty that no Konoha ninja may be within Konoha but allowed them free reign to enter Iwa. xD |
| HauntingTheNet chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 How the heck have you still not fixed this huge typo in chapter one? You posted this story on January 1st, 2010. By January 31st you had your first review mentioning the problem. To date you have had a total of seven people mention this huge issue, and I am making it eight now. "no Konoha shinobi is to come with 20 km of Konoha" This needs to be fixed. It should have been fixed eight years ago when it was first caught by a reviewer. Imagine a peace treaty between the United States and the Arab nations. "No Islamist combatant may come within 40 km of the United States, and no United States operative may come within 20 km of the United States." That is basically what you did there. The easy fix would be to simply replace "Iwa" for "Konoha" at the end of that sentence. The hilarious fix would be to have someone point out the confusion, only for Shibuma to admit that he did it deliberately to see if anyone was actually paying attention. Either way it should have been fixed eight years ago. |
| Temarixinoxfan chapter 4 . 3/16/2017 hope it continues |
| Temarixinoxfan chapter 4 . 3/13/2017 hope it continues |
| Monster King chapter 11 . 3/4/2017 Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it. |
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 4 . 5/23/2016 Oh HELL NO! Itachi and Ayame? That's it! Where are my weasel stomping boots? |
| Hecseferblade chapter 11 . 4/12/2016 This is a really good story. Really hope you come back to this cus I like it a lot |
