Sweet and simple. LOVE IT! Shiyori's quickly rising up my list of Bleach ships... It's already taking its place with IchiRuki, IshiHime, UlquiHime, GinRan, and ToshiKarin.

This is great. It's short, compact and beautifully written. And do not fear, for I can sense their presence easily and without any problems. Kudos to you for a job well done.

Good isn't the right term to use here.

If this was your first attempt, I'd love to read later ones-this was real and true and good.

~~Magickless

This deserves more reviews then it (hasn't actually) got. It is very near impossible, trying to pull off an angsty ShinjiHiyori piece, and you pulled it off extremely well. That last line just had me. (: So, so, epic. That abstract writing style is beauty in (what I think is) its best form. You describe everything so gorgeously! Kudos, dear author. Kudos. :D