Reviews for The Attainment of Evangeline
ciambella chapter 45 . 11/5/2018
I absolutely adore this story, it's amazing! I couldn't stop reading, I love everything about it. I have no words to describe how good this was, and how many emotions it made me feel. Thanks for writing and sharing such a beautiful (and beautifully written) story!
MS.FANTASTIC chapter 18 . 11/22/2015
SHIIIIIIIIT THIS IS SOOOOO AMAZING YOU ARE AMAZING
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
Please update soon
ImarealfanxD chapter 30 . 2/4/2015
Hello! You're story is amazing so far, believe me, I hardly ever read multi chapter fanfictions so I wouldn't have gone this far, but I though I should help you with your french, because it's my first language and your sentences were a bit off.
So, first of all "Monsieur bel" would actually be "Monsieur beau" or "Monsieur le beau" because "bel" is indeed one of the translations of handsome and is basically the same word as "beau", but we only use it in front of words that start with a vowel. Kind of like "a" and "an" in english. It's still a bit weird to say "Monsieur beau" because "beau" is an adjective that is rarely used as a noun, but I'm really unsure of what else you could use.
Second of all, the grammatically acceptable version of your second sentence in french would be "Êtes-vous prête pour une autre leçon de lutte, mon amour?" Now it's a bit weird because "luv" here becomes "my love" so if you wanted to go for the fact that it's what he wanted to say, then use this. Otherwise, maybe you could use "chérie" instead of "mon amour" which would basically translate to "honey", so it's still slightly more subtle than outright calling her "my love".
Just thought I should help ;)
SilverSpark chapter 45 . 1/18/2015
Wow. Okay. That was intense. My initial instinct is to ask what the F is wrong with you for writing that emotional torture but that would be counterproductive since I am really trying to say that I love this story! I read the last chapter at 12:00 am so I literally started my day crying, but I'm okay with that since the story was great. I loved every single word. (Okay, most of them)
Keep being awesome!
Mayflowers123 chapter 33 . 1/8/2015
She could always say she was on her period. (Chapter 33)
Ismira Shadeslayer chapter 45 . 12/26/2014
I hate you ;) I cried through the whole dang thing...I'm still cryin'! I can't stop! I loved it a lot...I am so happy you finished it! It's probably my favorite Sparrow fictiona and in the top 6 of over all fictions...it was beautifully writen...thank you for writing it... :D
Queen 'Danielle' Diamond chapter 45 . 7/25/2014
I absolutely loved this story. It is by far one of the best PotC stories I've ever read. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. I literally cried when he told her that the kiss was a mistake. I hope you continue writing stories as fabulous as this one.
Guest chapter 45 . 7/14/2014
Made me cry a couple of times but, love it love it love it!
Guest chapter 45 . 7/7/2014
;; best story
Guest chapter 45 . 6/24/2014
Thank you so much. This story was beautifully prepared and written. Congrats on your pregnancy and proposal. Hopefully, in the near future, Jack and Evangeline will have a child or two to add to a next adventure. Take care and God bless you and your child with a multitude of health.
Chelsea chapter 45 . 6/20/2014
I loved this story so much! I found it yesterday and failed to stop reading it. I fell completely in love with the characters and the story. It's by far the best fanfic I've ever read. I pray there be a sequel possibly. My mind is just over flowing with ideas for a sequel to this amazing and wonderful story. If you'd like to talk to me my email is I'd love to talk to you (: thank you so much for the amazing story
Eleanor chapter 45 . 6/14/2014
Oh my god, I'm jut crying because I've been following this story for years now and it's finally done and I can't even tell you how happy this has made me.

Thinking back to when I first started reading, I was young and stupid and depressed and in a really dark place and now when it's done I'm happy with my life and I'm looking back and this story has got me through some really tough times with updates. Plus, with this last chapter, I finally found the courage to tell the guy I love I'm in love with him.

I just want to say thanks, for writing such a perfect fanfiction. You've done the characters true justice, and you should be proud of yourself.

Can't wait for your new story!
catrina.nugget chapter 45 . 6/14/2014
Love it
AbyMoOn chapter 45 . 6/13/2014
After so many years I'm so proud of Evangeline and how this story ended.:-)
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