I know this is from like a decade ago and I've just started reading fanfiction but I just want to express how much I hate the main character. She's just so annoying and unlikable with all the narcissism and all. But I'm still going to read it because it's just really interesting

PLEASE UPDATE. I’ll cashapp you $25 to update, it’s 2019.

hahahahah!

Umm... If you're not going to continue the story, can you release a chapter that has the outline of what you would have written. Like the plot line. I'm hooked, but since you haven't updated in quite a while... I figure if you don't wannafinish the story... Cus I'm like Who ate the Akatsuki? How do the tailed beasts fit in? What the gangs reaction to her joining ganna be? And also, MISSING STUDENTS? How do the tailed beast/jinchuriki fit in?
Also, I really like your writing style. I read your other fanfiction with Mitsuki.(Honestly, besides her, Momji was my favorite character. Why couldn't she have run off with him instead of Orochimaru? ;) I liked the Chameleon chakra. You have good ideas, very creative.) It's very entertaining and quite honestly hillarious. You also phrase things... You make her thought process very easy to... Ahhh, I can't find a way to phrase it. ...hmm...
You know how in Edgar Allan Poe when you read his stories you can tell what the characters thought process is and how they're crazy. But it's smooth and doesn't interfere with the timing or plotline... Agh. That didn't come out right. Point is, I love you writing style. It's awesome. In your other fanfiction you wrote third person but it felt so personal almost like first. It's pretty amazing. Also, I love how you made your characters so quirky. They have ridiculous thought processes that actually make total sense. ...I don't know if that made sense...
Also, the way this all worked out with Sasori... Let's just say it was not what I expected but in a good way. I hope you release more, even if it is just half-thought plans and conspiracy theories of what will happen next... As an author can you make conspiracy theories about your own books? Only time will tell! ... I suppose.

P.S. Have you published any books? I want to read them. Your writing is great and, like I said (and I'm taking all of the credit for saying it. Do I get credit for saying it? I hope I do... Oops went off on a tangent- I like to write as if I'm an anime character just rembling on and on and o-) you also have good ideas. Seriously I did not see this Akatsuki thing coming. ..and did I mention I loved Momji? I do. You're good at making characters... You should write a book... If you don't have one. Oh wait does this fanfiction count, it's long like one. I think it does... Write another one please?! ( C'mon I asked nicely...)

I love this story! And I love her!

awesome chapter! Himawari's mom is hilarious, but I also low key hate her. Can't wait for the new chapter!

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE! _

OH MY GOD SHE ONE OF THE BIGGEST MARY SUES IN EXISTENCES WTF

DOES SHE SHE IS BETTER THAT DEIDARA?

IM GONNA KILL MYSELF EWWW

I'm sooo looking forward to when she finds out that 'she' is a he XD

please update!

Nuu she could have just slept through it.

PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS SO INTERESTING!

Where's the next chapter? T-T

Agree with everything starsandgalexies below said! Love the way you've taken us on this journey with Himawari. Hope you release us from this anticipation soon! Regardless, thanks for the ride so far. :)

Man, I know it's been over a year now, but I really really hope that you update this. I thought I loved The Facts of Life, but this is on a whole other level, in both originality and your writing style and character development. I love the way you incorporate the characters and their canon backgrounds, and it just keeps getting deeper!

I think I ship her and Sasori more, but there's also a part of me that ships her and Deidara and her and Kisame. So, I don't think my judgement can really be trusted. I do love the depth of her relationship with Gaara though, and man, is it tearing me up to see how it's falling apart.

Not to say that The Facts of Life wasn't good, because it was great, but this is a massive improvement. I feel like I see a lot more of you as a writer, and your style shines through, and I find my own creative juices start flowing a little more as I read. I feel like I'm learning from the way you write, weird as that is. And that's just your style alone.

The development of Himawari is wonderful and it's so entertaining and interesting to watch the way in which she interacts with all the different characters, and I love seeing the complexity of discovering her, while she discovers herself, and discovering everyone else. That sentence didn't entirely make sense, but hey! There are just so many layers to this story, and goodness, I hope you write an original novel/series one day because it would be amazing, no doubt.

That said, I do hold high hopes that this will end up finished, even if it takes another few years. I hope that it doesn't, but hey ;)

Happy writing, as I hope you still are, or shall return to soon! I can't honestly convey how much I love this one!