I know we want to drag this out as long as possible but this is really going too far. Cassie would just say, very quickly, those kids are adopted and he isn't with ilse.

I usually really like your fics but I am just not feeling this one for some reason.

Ok, i am kind of over the whole "jack doesn't understand why Sam won't change her mind but it never occurs to him that letting her think he had a family with his girlfriend might be a barrier."

And yeah, Sam is certain HER kids wouldn't be brats. Spoken like a woman without any children. Guessing written by someone without children, also.

Can I just confess that every time I read “her General” or “his Colonel” my tummy does flip flops? /sigh.

Bawling. I have to confess, a fic has never made me cry until now. And now I have to go back into work. Woman, you’re gonna be the death of me!

Not sure I’ve ever been so fed up with Sam! Good lord how can she be so brilliant and yet so stupid at the same time?!

You know an author’s characterization is on point when you can perfectly follow a stream of dialogue without having to be told who’s saying what. So good. So good!

this fic had me absolutely bawling my eyes out with sadness... but then I ended up bawling my eyes out with happiness! You’ve captured the essence of what a military romance like this must be like. Initially I thought the children in the story was going to be annoying haha but they turned out to be the most beautifulprecious part about it all!
Your Pete can rot in hell HAHAHAH he literally makes me clench my jaw.. however, I guess that’s a sign of a really damn good fic because I’ve never had such an emotional roller coaster reading something like this in my life.
Vinaka, thank you, for such a wild ride xx

One of my favorite chapters in this story. Love the argument between Sam and Pete as it highlighted how Sam compromised and Pete more or less did everything for leverage over Sam. Think about in Stargate SG-1 Pete tells Sam that he put in for a transfer to the Springs, without discussing it with her, then proposes. Which could be interpreted as I am moving for you so you have to marry me. Then he bought a house, again without discussing it with her, just before the wedding. Which was him say now you have to go through with the wedding.

Awww, so it ended well. Thank you so much!

I love this story and after reading it for the fifth time or so I still can't believe that Sam is so self centered to not even see the possibility of an emergency and jumps to conclusions.
And seriously after going through all this to talk to an engaged woman who said no to him so maybe she changes her mind a week or so before her wedding, other people would be happy to be still talking...
Anyway I just wanted to vent
This is no critique, because I love every word :-)

Pingu

she sheds one single tear while the rest of the fandom is sobbing uncontrollably on the floor.

i just adore Thor :D as much as i loathe pete. i can't remember the last time a fic affected me this badly. sam is so fkn thick i want to smack her. open your eyes FFS woman!

*ugly sobbing*

Omg having to imagine being with jack just so she can get aroused should be sending a clear msg that she's with the wrong man. Ugh Pete is such a pig!