A very creative story in my opinion. Slightly rushed but overall a very intriguing piece of writing. 4 stars out of 5.

Oh my goodness, this story was so intense and caring at the same time! I LOVE IT!

Although a couple of things were ooc (out of character) for the professor, the story was interesting and entertaning!

Even though it's hard to get past the professor's out-of-character...ness, I still liked it! Oh, and I wanted to ask cause it wasn't clear to me, are the professor and Katia living together?

:O

POOR LUKE!

The professor is really out of character, but I'll keep reading! You've got me hooked so far!

Good Story, I wasnt sure what to expect but I was pleasantly surprised :)

wow wat a great story. wasnt exactly wat i was expectin but good none the less

keep up the good work :)

Gasp! This was such a good story... so good... excuse me I need a moment to compose myself... so touching I cried... Ok so that was a bit melodramatic, but seriously it was a good story line, but there was a bit too much crying/gasping for my tastes.

P.S. Do not use sticky, it sounds funny... not haha funny. Good story, I'll keep reading.

You don't mind if I make my own version, right? Although a lot of people are doing things like Don Paolo kidnappings, I got my idea from you. The only similarities are Don Paolo kidnapping Luke and torture. xD I find myself really good at angsty stuff. That way you appreciate happy endings MUCH better. xD

'...as nobody but Don Paolo himself could be so melodramatic.' Haha, you got that right!

Off to a great start! It may be short, but it's really suspenseful. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh~ I love it. So much tension. :3

Please, do continue. :D