Reviews for Usagi, Hellsing Maid and Alucard's plaything! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The writing style and layout is a little hard to keep up with but i can see you put a lot of effort into this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy hell this was intense and awesome |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry but, what in the hell is this? I just sorted out Hellsing fanfiction into the most reviewed list and this is one of them!? I'm not expecting something like masterpiece literature but this... is really bad. I'm more surprised people are praising this kind of cringy fanfiction...Don't give me that "oh my gawd, if you don't like it don't read it" I wasn't able to finish it after chapter 5 and I don't need your permission to criticise it. This story doesn't have the Hellsing atmosphere at all...I was expecting dark suspense, adventurous, insanity or love obsession from Hellsing. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind the kinky stuff in the story but the way this fanfiction portrayed it was literally killing my brain cells. My only hope is either the most readers are young, or just reversely matured adults. |
![]() ![]() Oh, that insatiable vampire... |
![]() ![]() I was just thinking about when this story would be updated for the month a few days ago. Glad I didn't have to wait long! Can't wait for the big conclusion to all their foreplay either! |
![]() ![]() Steamy! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Aww. Only 7 or 8 more chapters? But I'll miss these characters! |
![]() ![]() Are you / is Alucard serious? - Usagi has cursed blood that only females have, - everybody says Usagi is a girl, - Usagi has the same scar AND the memory of her rescure from 14 years ago, - Alucard watched a teenage Usagi so he should recognise her, - Usagi got nearly raped, - Alucard felt her up, - 2-3 other males tried to get into her pants, - Usagi left a wet spot, ... and after ALL that Alucard still thinks of Usagi as a boy? He must have the IQ of a slice of bread to not notice... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot wait for the next chapter to arrive! You have another awaiting fan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is unreadable. damn shame too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great plot and chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is ok but you missed some parts Alucard can regenerate fast and has over 3 million souls... so he dosent really need somebody's blood... ... And the story is too fast paced its only chapter 5 and she already likes alcuard... but this fanfic is mostly well written you just need to slow down your plot more... otherwise it will be about video game length to read... I rate this story so far as 3.5 stars as I do love romance fanfics and this is pretty good... Keep up the good work just slow your plot down otherwise this fanfic will most likely burn out like a fire... |
![]() ![]() Were is the next chapter this is sooooooo good continue please |
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![]() ![]() Please continue it needs to continue |