Okay already dropped first Ricky wasnt even with luffy in the 2nd chapter now he is just there are you stupid or something or just forgot to mention him either way totally ridiculous and poor writing please rewrite and improve thank you.

It’s obvious he isn’t as strong as them, he’s stronger.

Aight imma give it another chance. Don’t fuck up.

He isn’t as strong? Shut the fuck up author, I’m
Done with this story.

Why is Ricky getting bitched by someone younger than him

Ricky being a waiter just turned me off this story. You could’ve found a better way to introduce him. A cooler way. Not a way that made him seem like a loser. Now I know he will be weak for the rest of the story.

If you are going to pretend to kill off a character in a future story don't set up an end poit like you said the story is sapoused to go to the alabaster ark so we know the main character is not going to die. In this case luffy is not the main character this story follows Ricky and how his presence chance the story

I had forgotten that Ricky's sword was an O' Wazamono...
I forgot a lot of little details about this story, at least I'll get to read them all over again.

Oh shit, this chapter has the beginning of the Swindling War! I started laughing once I realized it. I love Ricky's and Nami's war, it was fun when they where trying to out swindle the other. And the betting pool, can't forget about that.

Recently I noticed something, if Roger met Rayleigh in Sabaody when he was younger, which is located in the Grand Line, how did he start he's journey to the Grand Line when he was older and in East Blue.

I do enjoy the Animes Loguetown, so I never had a problem with this, and your fillers are always great so I never did mind this chapters.

In 3 years he acquired 3 different nicknames, granted, he'd wish one of those wasn't one to begin with.
'One-Eye' Ricky or just One Eye
'the Demon' Red Eyes
Jack of Spades

Even if Shane tried his best to kill Ricky, he will always be remembered by him. Ricky's an animal lover, and will always be one.
I didn't remember he's backstory being 4 chapters long actually, either way, I only remember bits and pieces of it.

Man, you had all of this stuff planned? I wouldn't be able to that even if I tried.
But thanks to that, you made Ricky an even more interesting character, and made us find out more about him while reading your story and I think that was great.

I love reading about Ricky's backstory, and in a sense, Ace's. Now I'll just go on ahead and read the second part of it.

What I wrote in my last review, about Ricky being one step ahead to Red Eyes, was meant for this chapter, oops.