This is one of my all time favorite twilight fics! I don't know why there aren't as many reviews a it deserves but I can tell you now that I will keep coming back to re-read it.

While this is well written, I thought it could be better. It was kind of difficult for me to finish because frankly I got bored with the plot.

In Oregon they do call it pop. I'm from NY where it's so-duh.

That was cool what you did there.

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Just wanted to say that I love this fic. I re-read this when I feel down in the dumps or just plain bored. Thanks for writing this!

This was so cute! I love BPOV, but it's good to hear what is going on in that elusive little head of Edward's.

Oh my god, these two!

Loveddddd "this shiz". James seems so sweet later on (about his gramps and stuff) I really loved what you did with bella !

"Mountain Lion? i thought this was all human." my thoughts until i read the AN. :)

That was a really good story! I like that Jasper and Rosaline know about Bella’s secret and later how Emmett was able to figure it out. When I read about Bella playing Nintendo with Charlie and then the games they mentioned made me remember playing those exact games when I was a kid. I like how Edward took Bella to see Toy Story as a surprise and then taking her to the meadow! It made me laugh that everyone was so eager for Jake to finally tell Paul how he felt. I have to say I do NOT agree with Bella’s “abortion views”.

So I really liked this story! It was cute and original, and made me stay up way too late to finish reading it :) Well done!

This soy was rec'd to me and I really liked the first chapter. Great idea and moving straight on to chapter 2 :)

Cute story. I see what you meant, your writing did improve as the story went along. Good jon!

Looks promising!