you make me cry so we are sad sad people

Hey,
Your fanfic has gotten a 10/10 for me. I'll tell you why, first of all as far as I could see your grammar and everything was correct. Another thing which really sold me on this fic was your portrayal of Itachi Uchiha. There are very few stories Itachi ones I mean, out there who can get even half of the emotion that you got and these were non-massacre ones. It was beautiful and I especially like the titles you did, they were very creative and I could tell you actually thought about it. I like The Abel Slew Cain one. So, while not my favorite overall fic, definitely on my top 2 of Itachi's. Good Job

I loved it, I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for sharing.

You did a really great job capturing Itachi in this. My favorite part? 'With friends like this...' and 'Nirvana... oh and 'Stranger in a strange land'.

Write more!

omfg feels
i feel like crying... itachi is the most martyr-ful martyr in naruto (yes i know i am so eloquent and expansive in my vocabulary)
really nice writing too

It has been /years/ since I dropped Naruto, but Itachi's story was one that gave me a lasting impression. These 20 scenes were excellently written, and faithfully reflect the complexities of his character. I'm glad that I managed to stumble upon this gem; thank you for writing this wonderful piece.

I loved it. Lovely and sad at the same time..

Simply Amazing!

This is so beautiful, there are no words to describe it! Itachi certainly is a complex character, and you did one hell of a job at capturing his personality.

Well I DID cry in the Nirvana part. Tears were struggling to storm out already from the "A true friend stabs you in the front" part but I couldn't hold them back when I finally reached "Nirvana".

Itachi shall always be in our hearts.

Awwww, I cried :/ This fanfic is truly awesome. It managed to move my heart, as well as many others'. You portrayed Itachi's thoughts and feelings perfectly :D

My, my, what to say? Is obvious you did a great job writting this, and I admire your job ‘choosing’ specific parts of Itachi’s life to create a long panorama of his actions. I found some more stunning than others but all of them are fantastic. I like Itachi, and I’m glad I found this story since I like the way your pitray him.

A great, great story.

Saludos!

Wow. That was brilliant. Your characterization of Itachi is one of the best I've read. ever. :D

that was wonderful. i dont even know what else to say-i had to try very hard not to burst into tears in the middle of my school's computer-lab :P

i loved the titles for each section of the story, and the way you seemed to get inside Itachi's head was dead-on.

great job, your writing is brilliant .

A truely interesting one-shot. You covered a lot of angles I have not seen before.