Good, except u should have made the reunion of may and drew, dawn and Paul, etc. more emotional!

You did a great job fellow Michigander! Five stars! Peace out! P.S. If you think Michigan is boring you should go skiing and snowboarding! I usually go to Cannonsburg in Grand Rapids or to Treetops in Gaylord.

The lady is ashes mom.

I think Gary should sing a song called “ I’m into you “

YO, I have read the whole thing and i friggin love it! it is so smart, so descriptive and there is a lt of tension. I honestly took so long trying to find this story again-

I read this whole thing, and it's really good. I love the drama, and it' a well made story. People should read this. *claps*

I found it kind of weird that Max would dance with an older chick. Yuck! Any way, this story was so worth reading. Good job, SurferGurl14. You're 1 awesome chick and author.

Talk about a surprising twist. Ash, Drew, Gary, and Paul were like May, Dawn, Leaf, and Misty this whole time. In that case, they deserve each other. Ash, Drew, Gary, and Paul should've given May, Dawn, Leaf, and Misty nice long relaxing foot massages on the beach. That would've been sexy and romantic to read about.

I'm not surprised to have read that Ash was struggling with the exam. I found it kind of odd that Dawn was painting her nails while the exam was going on, but i find that to be sexy too. What color was she painting them? Leaf sleeping sounds something like Ash would do during an exam. Wow! Drew got tackled attacked by 3 chicks. I wonder what he did for all the months he was gone. It's such a mystery.

I loved that Harley got beaten up. Yellow sounds just like your typical over protective big brother. I wish Paul had gotten involved romantically with a cool dark goth chick that had a dark side. That would've been very interesting. The part where Ash hid behind Delia and called her mommy was funny. Drew just can't stay away from her. He and she really do have each other wrapped around their little fingers.

There's some seriously good acting going on by the actors and actresses in this story. Shit! That bitch May still has her powers. Drew, please keep a low profile around her!

Delia is a clever woman. Ash sounds like he would've become obsessed with Misty if she had rejected him.

Why exactly did Leona ice herself off any way? All we know is that she heard some very hurtful words, but we don't even know what those words were, who said them, and why. May is so easily manipulated by Drew. All Rowan seems to care about is that dam play. Harley freaking sucks. Wow! Dawn came dangerously close to icing herself off.

I hope Erica, Brianna, and Solidad get arrested for stalking. Those 3 bitches deserve to be arrested. Harley is such a girly piece of shit. James dumped Leaf like a bad habit. He made the right chose. She's living in the past and when someone is living in the past, they can't find true happiness. Not only that, but she used James just to try to get over Drew and she couldn't even do that much. He's too good for her. It's about time Gary realized he's no where near as good as James. Drew was so spot on when he told May off. He, Ash, Gary, and Paul would've been better off with out May, Dawn, Leaf, and Misty in their lives. May's also right too. It's vice versa for both groups about being better off if they had never met each other.

Gary is really being a clingy fucking idiot. He can't take a freaking hint. James is much more mature than he is. I hope Leaf doesn't get romantically involved with him again.