| Reviews for Family of Perfection |
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   Kiki68 chapter 48 . 7/19 Always loved this story. I've read it so many times but still enjoy reading it. Bella and Edward are a bit immature I mean Esme / all the parents are always cleaning up after them/fighting their battles but it's still a fun one to read. The characters are different, funny and entertaining. Really enjoyed the story line too. |
| Bevey99 chapter 45 . 2/2 I loved this. Great Bella, and the sweetest Daddyward. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
| Bevey99 chapter 1 . 1/19 Bit of a sad start. Poor girls. |
| Tan chapter 1 . 10/19/2019 I love story idea but this is really badly written. You need a beta. |
| twlightbella chapter 32 . 9/12/2019 Scary |
| Venvevo387 chapter 48 . 6/22/2019 This story was amazing! Thank you for sharing it |
| rainne.2000.16 chapter 9 . 5/1/2019 I am loving this story. I especially loved Edward's photo album of his girls "his heart" , so sweet. |
| sue1zide chapter 26 . 1/23/2019 Bella's pregnant. Charlie is probably just what James needs right now. |
| sue1zide chapter 19 . 1/23/2019 Why didn't Esme & Carlisle give Edward a heads up about Renee? |
| sue1zide chapter 18 . 1/23/2019 I don't understand how people use children as bargaining tools. Selfish! |
| kini113 chapter 43 . 11/17/2018 Germany not France. Landstuhl, Germany is the military hospital where he would have been sent. Sorry to nit pick. Love your story |
| audyaurelie chapter 1 . 7/14/2018 edward acts like he loves her tho.. |
| Xoxo chapter 48 . 4/1/2018 I know its been eight years, but I would love to follow up on Tony, Stella and Emma. I wish Tony would like Stella eventually. Xoxo |
| ChristyWIX chapter 48 . 4/1/2018 Awww, that was another great outtake. I loved reading of their first time. Especially from his point of view. He really had loved her for such a long time, just like she did him. Which we learned in the actual story but, it was reiterated her in the very best way. Knowing that he accepted her pregnancy from th very moment he learned of it, makes it so much better too. Remembering back to her flashback of him learning she was pregnant. Him on his knees so soon and speaking to their child. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. It has been a great journey. ~Christy |
| ChristyWIX chapter 47 . 4/1/2018 Ah, so that’s how that went down. I’m glad that Charlie knew right from go, that Bella wasn’t smoking that crap in her room. Him taking the boys in the squad car was funny. Seems Edward liked Bella back then, just as much. With his reaction to her allowing Jasper to drive her home from school. He was not too happy about that. |
