Aaaawwwwwwwwwwwww cute!

Hello daisscrapper,

I just found your story and loved it. I'm hopping that you plan to continue with it. ShellBean

Aw that was so cute _. Ronon is such a softy, despite his outward appearance, and you did a good job of displaying that. A bit of the characterization was a little too 'off' for me, but since it's fanfiction it doesn't matter much lol.

Really enjoyed the story, good job!

Beautiful. Not too long not too short. I love it.

Completely loved it! This story was great!

This story was really sweet!

I like this story a lot. You've written these characters really well. I love how you write Carter - she definitely would have reacted to this in the way you described.

FINALLY! Such a sweet ending! Good job with the story.

Ronon Ronon Ronon ... you had the perfect opportunity to make your move! Jennifer is not going to figure this out on her own!

This is a fun read.

Loved the interaction between these two. Sweet ending.

Enjoying this just as much the second time around as I did he first. Love how protective Ronon is of Jennifer. Glad she is continuing on the self defense lessons - she needs them!

So... got sucked into the story again. Really did like this chapter and her misspeak with Lorne.

ZOMG WTF BBQ more Ronon and Jennifer GOODNESS please! EK! Twas WONDERFULFUL! But I still feel sorry for poor Major Lorne...

I can just imagine Ronon getting whalloped in the face for tickling

:) Awesome. That was funny and very sweet, loved it.