I've always thought his don't apologise rule because it equals weakness was the worst one... I'm excited to see where you're going with Shava.

Sigh, still hoping Alex gets murdered.

What kind of crap investigators are NCIS? They haven't done a door to door search of Burley's neighbors to see if anyone saw or heard anything?!

Lovely. Both Ziva and Tony together and their specific characters. You've got them down pat.

I never understood why Gibbs had such a problem with psychoanalyzing unsubs when he does the exact same thing. Just without the technical terms.

Great opening. I guess it's too much to hope that both Alex and Erica will be killed too? (I know, I know, I'm being a bit harsh on two teens, but seriously...)

Awesome story, a real treat to read. Thank you for hours of enjoyment.

You have no idea how happy it made me to see my religious beliefs shared by Freiler! It's really rare to run across a Mormon character, and even rarer to have it portrayed in a fair and respectful manner. I was quite frankly delighted. Thank you for that!

I really enjoyed the beginning chapter on this one. Another terrific story!

I have been reading your stories for the last couple of months and have enjoyed them immensely. You are a great case fic writer. Sometimes too much about the OC. Really sad that Tony and Ziva are left in Bahrain though and am hoping in the next stories that they come back. Also, loved reading about your RL and you sure do deserve a lot of credit for all you have accomplished.
Wished you were still writing though.

Hi,

This is exceptional. I am not at all surprised you have graduated to original fiction. You are very talented.

Well done

Tidy

Good chapter.

Oops!

Beautiful speeches.

Sounds like fun.