I like it i cant wet for the next story write soon.

I think it's really good! I love how they're all still so close.

aww this was really sweet. i love how they were still close, they still just connected.

wow!

so this is the first story i read of urs and i think your writing is really good!

i love how you got all of the characters to come together from their other groups. like one big happy family!

keep on writing!

that was amazing. especially the ending. and i really liked the part bout jackson kissing mel at the end. it was really cute. i hope 2 c more of ur f29dwn fanfics.

Oh my gosh that was good! I had always wondered what would go on after they got home, and here it is! The writing was fabulous, and, unless I missed some miniscule detail, flawless. I loved it! 3

Great job! The story really flowed well and was interesting.

haha

that was cute, i liked it