Reviews for Master The Unexpected
Great chapter 11 . 1/16/2014
Poor Ash, but yeah, he has a Ho-Oh! Looking forward to more!
Amgelgem135 chapter 3 . 8/7/2009
why didnt Ash want to see Misty?
Paradice chapter 11 . 1/5/2006
i don't know if u still read ur reveiw but,this is a great story, and one thing i have to point out is...how come it takes u ages to update, u last updated in 2002 and it 2006 now (sorry) but u authors take too long. well sometimes ;)

This is a wicked story and i really want to know wat happens next so update very soon. :)
sonic 1 chapter 11 . 12/30/2005
i really like this please do more
Chaos-Paladin chapter 11 . 5/5/2005
plz plz plz continue! this is getting so awesome! your format seems odd but i love it anyways. you havent updated for years! get to it plz!
melsbells91 chapter 10 . 2/24/2005
Hello, this is soposed to be for chapter 11 but those stupid regection codes _
melsbells91 chapter 11 . 1/23/2005
Hi, how are you. I read this one at the Pokemon Tower too but i felt like reading it again to see if it was finished. It is so great and really good so PLEASE update soon.
BoneSatellite chapter 11 . 6/17/2004
I love cliffhangers. I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. I hate it when certain authors (in this case they're all female by coincidence) wait dozens and dozens of years before continuing such terrific stories.
BoneSatellite chapter 11 . 6/17/2004
I love cliffhangers.

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Finish it, inless you want to deal with Bob The Magic Monkey.
bns560 chapter 11 . 5/15/2004
This story rocks. The Ash/Butch thing kinda freaked me out though... Oo; Heh... Anyways, I can't wait until chapter 12!
Kat chapter 11 . 4/11/2004
Finish Master The Unexpected!
Kit Kat chapter 11 . 3/28/2003
Please Please Update! I love your story so far.
scout chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
I hope that you are going to include some pokemon battles in your story, because I am a talent agent, and I would love for you to win 5,000 dollars!
Musogato chapter 11 . 1/9/2003
VERY interested in what happens next, so please continue! -
Loon Of The Fruits chapter 11 . 1/4/2003
I really, really hope you continue this! I HATE cliffhangers and I really hope to see this continued soon! And it was even published on my b-day!

Keep up the awesome work! _

Enja
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