Haha, totally know how it goes with the Word document thing. xD

Just caught a couple issues with punctuation and spelling, but they look like just typos. No big. I still like the storyline, and I wanna see where all you go with it. D

And Jack...haha, that kid's going places, I can tell. Will he be back?

-Lucy

Hm, I'm curious to see where this goes...keep it up!

-Lucy

sounds good keep it up!