I am giving up on life you ruined my dreams

YES THERE GETTING MARRIED THANK GOD WAY TA GO SEVVY

Were you watching Disney's Hercules when you wrote the part of Voldemort coming in?

Fantastic story, I had a great time reading this. Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us.

That was an amazing, interesting, exciting, sweet, romantic and dramatic Story. The Charakter developement were great really good work. *Cookies for you*

This was a great story to read, the epilogue was a little convoluted, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

wow. that was good. i liked how you told what happened to the parents and their children

Good story keep it up!

Hmm, I'm not really sure what I think about this fic to be honest. I love the ideas behind the story, but I think that your writing style needs some improvement. In some parts, you just listed things I guess (not entirely sure what phrase to use here), and there was no description. This happened a lot when they were recieving presents etc "Hermione got ..." Its better to split it up into smaller chunks, its much easier to read. The example that another reviewer gave was brilliant, use it :)

Admittedly, I didn't really read the last chapter, it was so hard to keep track of, and seemed like a massive spiel, which wasn't engaging enough. I got lost so many times when attempting to read it :p

I'm not sure if you have a beta or not, as I don't often read the author notes, but if you do, I think you need a new one. There were quite a few spelling and grammatical errors in your fic (there weren't too many, but I tend to pick up on them a lot). One thing that I found especially annoying was the misspelling of Grimmaud Place, please fic this! Its not hard to find the correct spelling, just google it :p also, Zambini? Its Zabini... No m :)

Sorry for the mini-rant :p it really was a good fic, but could become great if you take everyone's criticisms and improvements into account :)

Grimauld place. not grimwald .

I looove the story, only one thing has been irratating me. it's Blaise Zabini, not zambini.

love the story 4

This was a beautiful story.

Good story, I first found it a few years ago when you had like 11 chapters and in august I'm like should read this again, I was ever so pleased when. I saw you had 40 some chapters and had ended it. :3, i have always and will for a long time more have a special place in my heart for this fic... If you would overdo an epolouge story to this id most likely love it... CHEARS

I have to say, this was an absolutely lovely story; you had the reader feeling the emotions of the characters, crying over the deaths... Honestly, it was like reading Harry Potter all over again!

I'd love to see more of your writing!

Absolutely Amazing!