I think the pain just hurts less and is a Little numb and seems like nothing cuz he has been hurt worse before

I get what you mean, kid super heroes are awesome. That's why my favorite (even though only one of them is proclaimed an actual super hero) is Sonic the hedgehog (he's fifteen) Danny and Raven from teen titans, Spiderman (dunno his actual age but he's in high school so) the only other super heroes I like are adults bat man and iron man.

This could lead to a pretty interesting story about a ghost addicted to attention.

I laughed so hard reading this. It is so true, haha. And, I just love the changing eye colors and her bazillion names. Haha, excellent. As for the writing part, I really thought it was good, very descriptive and grammar was good. You described the situation beautifully, fully getting into the OC's mind. Love it! XD

Dear ChopSuzi,

Thank you for interesting collection of one shots. They were well done.

In the first one I liked the way you got a good feel for both Coraline and Danny Phantom. It was a nice introduction with the indication that the stories would run into each other, but a few more hints as to in which way would have been good. Of course good one shots often make me wish for the rest of the story.

For the third story, nicely done. Danny's rendition would sure give them the creeps. Fore someone who doesn't like horror movies - neither do I- you have a touch for invoking uneasiness in your readers.

I'm not familiar with Glee but Danny would walk right into the trap.

I appreciated the tonsillitis story because that is how I was first introduced to Danny Phantom. My daughter had me watch it was I was keeping her company as she recovered from her surgery. Chronic flare ups for her meant a regular reoccurrence every six weeks.

I also appreciated the one on chemistry as my 5th graders just had a quiz on it.

And yes, I've brought chickens (and other birds) to school.

Brynn. BRYNN.

Y U MAKE THIS SO ADORABLE?

LMAO.

I really enjoy reading your fanfiction with Riley in it; she's a fantastic OC, and I love her interactions with the trio.

Also, the story with the spider and the princess was really touching. You should turn it into a novel. I'd buy it.

I liked the ending of this story also.

Interesting idea! You should definitely continue it!

oooh, i like this idea, ehehe~! unique compared to the whole, "oh look, they aaaaall went into the portal~!" thing!

...eheheheheheeeee

I really need to consider adopting dis one...

Oh gosh that's amazing.

At my school the greatest senior prank ever was when the set smoke bombs off in the tech wing. The whole school evacuated, and when everyone was standing outside, a bunch of kids dressed as ninjas ran ouut from the forest (right beside the school), climbed up the side of the school, and let down a bunch of huge banners from the roof. Then they jumped off the other side of the school and ran back into the forest. It was the single greatest day in the school's history.

I'm still stuck trying to come up with some way to top it - but... live... chickens... gosh, how would someone even manage that? xDD

That sounds gorgeous.

~Dash

I really want to do this - like...REALLY - but for some reason doubt that I can. I'm MORE than familiar with the symptoms... I just... don't know if I'd be able to keep it in character. Especially Dash. I cannot write Dash. I don't know why. He kills me. ._.

But I know that this idea is never going to leave me alone now. .

I'll probably end up trying it sometime in the future, once I've gotten better at writing some of the characters. u

~Dash

Oh mercy, this was hilarious! If you're absolutely sure that you're not going to continue it and nobody else has laid claims to it, then I may be interested in continuing it.

With much skill and precision. ;)

...did not see that coming... XD

;)