Hullo there! I felt you needed another review because this story is going unnoticed, and because I watched Taggart last night and have some more useful info than I had last time.

Anyway, based on my observations last night (it took me 57 minutes to work out who everyone was) I've decided that they're pretty in character, and you're a WAAAAY better writer than me. Even if I wanted to be better than you I'll never be, honestly (except perhaps in chapter 10 of Brothers in Arms, but that was a gem of a chapter). Lol, couldn't be completely modest with you, could I?

Anyway, I liked this story. I might have to log back in and fave it now. This is why you're on my fave author list, mate.

One thing though, you've done a lot of speech and not very much action. Your little action snippets are good, but I figured you could've perhaps recapped the... goings-on (I can't think of the right word here) of the episode so that people - me included - who haven't seen this episode know what your talking about.

Anywho, nice story with my newfound appreciation

~ARTY~

Helo! It was... good... 'to the right and further down'...(!) It was good... I was all up for spirals of self-loathing but hey, I think we can make an exception here, eh? I have watched Taggart before, like once, and I don't remember it... Hmm... Maybe I'll watch it sometime... I'm not going to say what you're waiting for me to say about Robbie... The timing's wrong, dear... Anyway... Generally I like it (Moulin Rouge quote)... See you later my dearie! (Do you dread it that much now? Really, seriously?) Anyway, you never know, I might read that other one of your stories I haven't read yet in a minute... ly

~ARTY~ x

This is a fantastic episode of Taggart and I do wish that this was actually in the episode now! A beautiful ending but a great way to introduce yourself to our small little family of writers. I hope we hear more from you soon!

Hello and welcome to the family of Taggart writers. This is a great end to the episode and it's always nice to see how everyone reacted to the situation. I can't wait for you to write more :D

Sorry fanfiction wouldnt let me log in on my phone.

I love that episode, and for someone who doesnt know much about taggart you portrayed them very well. I really hope youll be writing more soon :d

That was absolutely amazing!

Your writing style is brilliant and now I have looked at that, I don't feel like I can put my own story up!

I eagerly await the next chapter :D I am sure it will be as marvellous as the first.

Emma ] x

*dances around* I loved that! I was only *slightly* looking froward to this...okay I needed it! And even though you haven't watched much Taggart and were nervous, it was so good. You got the characters spot on and I really want you to write more for this show because it makes me grin like an idiot, like I am now! Now I have a huge craving to watch "Law" again. Loved Jackie's little thoughts and you managed to write one of my favourite stories even though it doesn't have any Robbie/Jackie in it, which is one of the first times that's happened! I think this is turning into one of the personal message-like essays so I'll take a deep breath and say bye bye and thank you for publishing this, your writing style is mesmerizing! xx