Hello there, nice story here! Thabk you a lot for writing it.

I liked the first chapter more because it was more coherent with the Naruto's and Shika's character. The second chapter moved kinda too fast, it would have been nice to have more building up before them being together (sorry for my poor english, it's not my main language).

I liked the fact that you made Naruto scared of storms and him being cute about it.

That being said, I had a good time reading it, so thank you very much for taking the time to write it!

Nice and fluffy hits the spot. I did feel they were both just a tiny bit out of character (Shika a bit more than Naru), though that might be just because of how fast things seemed to go. Still, I enjoyed the story.

Hi.
I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your fic. There are few ShikaNaru out there. I know they are not the most popular couple but they are so good together ! When I feel a bit poetic about things, I like to think of them as a balance like light and shadow. Something so connected that it can not be separated, different but complementary. And his story was sweet and made me smile. Naruto is always so strong, it seems that no one notices he may be fragile at some points. Seeing Shika taking care of him was good. I appreciate that. And if by some miracle you know of a good longfic on them, on any website, I would love to know. I see you around the /

Shikamaru is very smart he would never forget anything ( I think )

Aww... such a sweet ending. It was a lovely little story, and it was well written to boot! This story put a smile on my face :)

Amazing story. It's absolutely adorable I hope you continue to write (whether for this story or another is your choice and only yours). I love the fact that you have given the couple the talent and effort in this amazing work.

I really liked this story! I am really hoping you make a sequel to this, as I also agree that there is a lot more to develop. One thing I didn't like was how they went from what seemed like 0 to 100 real quick. Naruto trusts on the outside, but I personally believe that he still has a slight sadness and mistrust when it comes to other people, and I think with love it would be more prevalent. Just an idea for maybe a future story like this with Naruto!

That storm and the nosy coming from Naru-chan's apartment would be a good cover up for some steamy sexy time! ;)

epilogue idea, what happens wwhen the plumber is done, i.e. will naru live in his place move in with hika etc

That was awesome!

It was a cute story

Thanks

***Pyrane***

amazing!

Awww! No more chapters? Please update soon, this story is pretty funny! \-(0)-/

Good peace, liked the pace for a two shot story thank you for your gift of a new story and giving this wondering reader a good story