ok so if we get arthur and gwen i want merlin in morgana...please

'm begging now

love always

Lauren xx

Great job! Poor Merlin...I hope him/Morgana and Arthur/Gwen can get together!

Uh-oh...

Is Uther really going to be okay with this?

cant wait till u update xx

YAY he didn't seem angry :)

But poor Merlin at the end - he should just go find Morgana and kiss her, I think :) In a room full of people - including the king. I think that might be sweet hehe :D

Again - another great chapter

Keep 'em coming x

Aw - some Merlin/Morgana :) But silly Merlin, walking away like that. No wonder she was angry

Good chapter x

Aw - Uther wasn't as surprised as I would have thought haha He definitely wasn't angry (yet) which must be good?

Loving this - write more :) x

Can't wait for me... please tell me there will be more

totally and utterly amazing more please xx

Totaly amazing!

Please go on...but do paragraphs, they would realy help to read your stoty better!

okok more please merlin needs some lovin'

Love always

Lauren xx

I'll keep reading as long a you use double spaces...you don't know how horrible it is to read like this...but, apart from that it's gd.

Really good ideas in there - but maybe you should try more paragraphing? Just a suggestion - it was a little hard to read in places

Great story, though - I shall look out for more x

It was good, but you need to start using paragraphs, to break things up a bit, if i had just seen that, it looked very long and probabley would not have read it,had it not been about AG.

Good plot and storyline, just work on the structure.

Yay, first review!