Waw! Very sexy! But, at the same time, very sad... Watson, for not realising that Holmes is his perfect love and Holmes for feeling rejected... You're a true writer! Kudos!

Very well written, especially the inner dialogue. I do have one recommendation though - change the oil to something less harsh. Cedar oil would hurt like hell.

i HATE THE WAY wATSON TREATS hOLMES. like he dosen,t mean anything. very good story , by the way.

The prose, the flow - it was absolutely perfect. I love finding beautiful, well-written, and in character Holmes/Watson stories.

This, quite literally, took my breath away. I wish that I could give some actual meaningful feedback but this was just... amazing in every way.

I believe this story has set on me a new and strong obsession with this pairing xD

BRAVO

Brilliant!

Oh. My. Gosh. This is literally beautiful and SO SAD. I am a huge fan of Watson/Holmes, but I must admit I do enjoy happy times between them, and this is probably mroe accurate, but made me quite sad. Exquisite and skilled writing, only a few spelling mistakes that I am sure you would find should you read over it.

HUGS and thanks so much...Wow.

You. Are. Brilliant.

I swear, when I went looking for holmes/watson fics, I never thought one of the first things I'd find would be so god damn gorgeous and perfect in every way. Which, frankly, IT IS.

I say this with complete conviction, you should find a way to publish your work. Your prose, your writing flow, your essentially perfect narratives, pretty much make me stupid jealous of you, and make me want to BUYBUYBUY whatever you're willing to dish out for us feeble minded fic-writers. :D

So please, (pretty please) keep writing awesome stuff like this. (it would be a sin not to)

Thanks for inspiring me, :D

Wah! Nice one ! Excellent one actually ! The writing goes smoothly, the characterization is quite loyal to the movie's. I was sort of disappointed that Watson gave in at first, but the bitter ending made up for it !

Oh my god. That was brilliant.

Macaday me a nut (and you're one too!)

This was heartbreaking and hot all in one! Loved it! Poor Holmes, Watson wouldn't even look at him at the end. For some reason all I can see is RDJ's puppy dog eyes here (He's the hottest Sherlock by far!) being all sad and big. ::Sniff sniff:: I adore this story!

Perfection.

... LOVED THE ENDING!

~ it was slow and wonderful! Sweet and hardcore. I love it!

This. Is. Spectacular.

I've read a lot of this genre, but this truly takes the cake. It was perfectly in character, deeply emotional, and incredibly sexy. Please keep up the good work!