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Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2018 Just wanted to say this is my favorite Hermione/Fred fic and I hope you continue it someday! Thanks for writing! |
Teekalin chapter 10 . 8/24/2017 I have read the rewrite on ao3 and I desperately want you to continue with it. The four chapters you've finished there are so much better with the added bits, even though the story stays the same in general. And if you continue in that direction then I know this story will turn into one of my favourite ones. Especially considering how good it is already :-) So please update soon :-) |
English Major chapter 4 . 7/4/2017 You have some unique ideas and I am enjoying your plot progression, but you have some major issues keeping the tense of your writing consistent. Are you telling the story in past or present tense? You need to pay more attention to your verb tenses; you are mixing past and present, often in the same sentence and this makes your story very hard to follow. Keep writing! Your writing can only improve if you pay more attention to every single word you type. Try reading what you have written out loud, that will often bring to light any inconsistencies. Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction. |
Asa chapter 10 . 5/19/2017 Yet another amazing story that is unfinished.. |
Pergjithshme chapter 8 . 2/18/2017 HERMIONE! WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS?! |
Pergjithshme chapter 7 . 2/18/2017 I want to know what happened at the pub though! And why Fred was AWOL... |
Pergjithshme chapter 4 . 2/17/2017 well that was awkward and adorable |
Pergjithshme chapter 3 . 2/17/2017 if this is filler i love me some filler |
Pergjithshme chapter 2 . 2/17/2017 Whoa! Gutsy move, 'Mione. And...oh. my heart hurts but idk if it's happy or sad... |
Pergjithshme chapter 1 . 2/17/2017 whaaaaaat...wow. So much. I loved the photo bit. Time travel fix its are my jam. But... Percy? D: |
dmtrialexi chapter 10 . 6/18/2016 Im legit in tears right now omg |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/1/2016 Really loved the chemistry between them,there was a lot of sweetness and hope and u nade their feelings very tangible |
Kitten99 chapter 9 . 3/5/2015 For someone how didn't like this chapter, you did actually do a good job. Not as action-packed as the others, I'll admit, but still rather entertaining. I mean, at least it's not boring! (And trust me, I've read some shockers) :3 |
lady white roses chapter 10 . 3/3/2015 Highly disappointed that it ended where it did This had more potential than most of the stories I've attempted to read. Sincerely hope you reconsider on updating. |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/30/2014 What's AO3 and how do I get there help me! |