Noooooo... D: omfgosh! o.O Aish... i can't believe they liked each other and then- and then... oh god the pain D: They imprinted on the others still! D: this is so harsh... But ANYWAY- haha, i loved the fic, thanks for posting it man -

hell no, hell no, HELL NO!

FUCK YOU RACHEL!

as you can see Rachel is not my favorite character, i don't like her.

can't she just go away forever and just let Paul and Jared make sweet love together.

i don't want Paul to fall in love with Rachel!

*cries in corner*

*cough* well anyway can't wait till the second chapter.

so far i'm loving it

(like McDonald, but this story doesn't suck)

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Im Ok with this. lls

I'm sorry my comment won't be very helpful, but I have one thing to say on this, and nothing more to say. Perfect. I didn't even realized you called it a crack-pairing until I was about to read it again. It's just that awesome.

Can I just say that I cried at the last line? This was awesome, there aren't enough Paul/Jared fics!

You are seriously the best writer ever. I wish I had half of your talent lol :-) Great job and adorable story! :-D

This is amazing entertaining and well-written

such a shame there aren't more fics with them.

alas, love this bit

That imprinting shit really does screw everything up, doesn't it! I really liked this. Thanks.

Okay should write another Paul/Jared fic.

should write a sequal to this... like Paul didn't imprint on Rachel , but thought he did & imprints for real on Jared. Jared is like really sad when Paul is dating, Paul catches him crying & Jared confesses he imprinted.

I love it. Anyway THX 4 writing. You get a big hug and cookie!

Well damn that imprinting to hell! Haha, too bad he didn't cath Jared's eye in the end. Awesome one-shot its cooler than...whatever is really cool lol.

Wah the ending You break my heart every time and I love you for it, Goddamnit.

I think I love this pairing now, great job.

Yowza!

That was something hot and sad :-( and though I don't ship Pared? Jaul?... I love Paul and I love Jared so I love this. (It makes sense to me) And that last line was killer. If I didn't love Ray Ray so much I would hate her. Ya get me?

Cool :-D

lol! jared and paul? you're crazy! and i love you for it P