This is brilliant! I can really see how you included the lyrics into your fic because reading the lyrics again, its like reading Sakuras thoughts.

I really like this sort of semi-dark Sakura because it makes the end so much more...something...like, boom? I don't know, it's late and coherrant thoughts are lost to me, but a great GREAT story, once again. _

I really liked the description of her as a sheet of ice. Really original and profound I thought. I think you should keep going with this one and maybe show the wedding day. :)

This is really awesome. It reminds me of glass, beautiful but with a sharp edge. I don't mean that to be some lame analogy to the title, I really mean it! :)

Ga! I'm squealing. Your write beautifully. You should try your hand at some SasuNaru. Or at least read some, you'll fall in love with them too.

good story!

Nice! I love that subdued, understated feeling of secrets and things left unsaid. There's good dialougue and description, too. A lovely piece.