Awesome.

Wow! That was really good and so intense. The best part is that I'm not sure if the Saiyuki world or the modern world was the real one. This was really amazing. Just wow.

This was so good, I love it. It had me thinking of a short story that I read back in WL 102 called "The Night Face Up" by Julio Cortazar. I loved your ending so much better than the one in the short story, I was hoping - while reading it - that it wouldn't end like "The Night Face Up". I felt so bad for Gojyo, you had me almost in tears. Keep writing I want to read more.

Okay, I really, really don't want him to go back to being 'Gordon Shaw'. *bats eyes* pretty please?

This...This was so beautiful. Hun...It made me want to cry. That's not even fair. This was absolutely amazing. You managed to do so much in so little, managed to bring it all together without making it tacky or predictable...I love it. I adored it. I can't gush about this enough. I'm not going to lie; Sanzo was really really relieved.

oo plot twist! nice job! :)

And what about this was supposed to make us feel better? Just wondering.

Either way, this is really well done. Yet again. You manage to portray so much in so few words; I'm so totally jealous. I have to ramble and ramble and ramble before I get anywhere near saying what you can say in one paragraph.

And seeing as this one came out so promptly after the former, I expect a higher rate of chapter completion now. You brought it on yourself.

...

This is still really really good. Ridiculously so. It's so well done that a few of us over here are starting to feel offended and hurt. And left behind.

Please continue. You have to.

I'm still not sure where you're going with this, but you have me intrigued.

*angry face*

The fact that you can keep going with little chapters like this and somehow still have me almost painfully hooked is almost diabolical. I mean honestly! You give me this slim glimpse of hope or plot development or maybe a hint at what's going on and then BANG! NO! NOT FOR ME! THE CHAPTER'S OVER! ...How rude. Write faster.

Wow. Although I'm not big on AUs in general, I really like your writing style. And, the short chapters seem to work for this story.

English revision? What English revision? I have free time. I don't have homework. This isn't me putting things off...

But yes! On to an actual review. Your chapters are so short but they're so perfect. They're so dead on. You manage to summize things perfectly and effectively. There's no unnecessary detail and they're just the right length to make me go, 'Ugh! Why is there not more to this?'. Which, though it doesn't sound like it, is definitely a good thing.

I love the imagery in this. And the whole stress factor. It's fantastically done. Emotions are being portrayed perfectly. I'm totally jealous of you right now. The whole aspect of doubt and fear and denial and the addition of the outside people is just...It's really really brilliant. I can't tell you how much I love this. It really is one of your better pieces and that's saying something. Keep it up.

Way to rearrange Banri by the way. I'll never be able to look at my uncle Brian the same way again. XDD

You tease! This chapter is too short! LOL.

A case of switching bodies and how the hell is Gojyo gonna get back to the rest? I am anticipating to read how you're gonna go about this.

Please update soon.

Buh? Wha? E~! *runs in circles for a while* ... *calms down* ... *sits down* OK. Let's start making sense now:

I'm strangely excited for this story of yours. I'm all giddy and curious and like, "OMG when's the next chapter coming". So you know what that means? That means I'm going to be watching you. I'm going to make you finish this. 'cause if you don't I don't think Hakkai will want to speak to you again. XD

oh build up! :)