This was interesting :)

Minerva MacGonagall is such an interesting and strong character , and I think you've made her justice,and that is saying something,since she's such a fascinating women. Ypir writting is great and the story original, great work !

Hey Rachel! :D

I loved this. It's rather comical, how uptight McGonagall is, even in her teenage years. And then she takes down her bun, and everyone is stunned by how different she looks...:D Just lovely!

I've never thought of this before; I never noticed how symbolic her bun was. This fic is great! It made me laugh, especially when the "stern" aspects of McGonagall were shown, and then at the end, when those boys were struck dead by her hair. I love how she seemed to view herself as a girl at last.

Loved it, Rachel! You should totally do more like this! :)

~Berry

Really I'm the first reviewer! I'm a big fan of Professor McGonagall too and I've always wondered what she was like as a student. Great vision for her. and thank you for sticking to the book it bugs me when people base their ideas stritly on the movies though they help I'm not saying Maggie Smith doesn't play a good McGonagall I'm just saying her hair isn't black like in the books. Wow I think I rambled enough thanks for the easy read I really enjoyed it.