Nice

Excellent. Very well written

So full of emotion. Good job.

That was very sweet!

THAT WAS SO AWESOME!

I liked a lot the way you portrayed both Han and our dear twins Luke and Leia. I was quite an insight to what was happening inside Han's mind after he learned the type of bond which Leia and Luke shared. It was just great.

That was brilliant, stunning and beautiful. I loved it! I'm going to quote back some of my favorite parts if that's okay. :)

" Their eyes were different colors, but they flashed the same way when they were angry, danced the same way when they found – usually the same – something amusing, watered the same way when they were in pain. Not that he’d ever let either of them know that he’d witnessed the few tears that they’d shed. He liked all of his limbs just where they were, thanks.

They tilted their heads the same way when they considered something, they sighed the same way when they were disappointed, they sought solitude when they were confused and unhappy, offered him that bemused, heart-wrenching smile when they were confused and happy."

Loved that. Just perfect. And:

"Han’s friends were few and far between, and even those who he considered friends were usually mere acquaintances, often for convenience, that he held at arm length. Of course the two people who had ever managed to really disarm him would be related.

Suddenly, it all made sense. The easy camaraderie that the two had shared, as if by instinct, from nearly the moment they had first met. The gentleness and love in Leia’s voice every time she spoke to Luke, or about him. The comfortable gestures, the touches, the hugs, and the physical affection that had always come so naturally to his two closest companions. And who wants a gentle lover anyway? Han thought light-heartedly. She’s welcome to use all the tenderness she wants on the kid – I like her feisty."

Haha. Very accurate descriptions on the relationships between them all. :)

And this part:

"The door was open, framing a disgruntled Luke, trying valiantly to get away from a finely dressed Leia whose hair was hanging down her back in loose hunks as she struggled to stuff him into a heavy gold jacket.

“Just put – it – on!” she panted, as Luke made another break for freedom. He probably would have been long gone by now, if his noble nature hadn’t been keeping him from causing any harm to the princess.

“Lei-a,” Luke whined."

LOL!

And this part, wow:

"Luke, for being a poor farm boy from the farthest possible planet from the center of the civilized galaxy, had quite a flair for the dramatic, making his entrance like that. As Luke had strode purposefully down the steps to the main dais, Han had felt a jolt somewhere just under his heart. The naïve, often stupid little boy he had grown so fond of was apparently gone, replaced by this striking young man. Dressed all in black, with that terrifyingly incomprehensible power cloaking him like a robe, Han had thought that Luke really was a Jedi knight. At the very least, he certainly looked like he had stepped out of one of the old myths; he looked like a hero. Han had been proud and a little sad – it made him feel old to watch his young friends grow up that way – but he had honestly been over-joyed to see him. He stood, began making his way over to tussle Luke’s hair, to try to get him to look more like the Luke that he remembered, when Leia intercepted him."

Ok, I'd better stop before I quote the whole thing back. Can you tell I enjoyed it? ;)

Wonderfully done. A masterpiece.

Oh, that was wonderful! You're very talented; I really felt you captured Han's character perfectly. The Luke/Leia sibling dynamic was incredible. You write very well - I was entranced all the way through. Thank you for writing this!

~ Estora ~