I'm so sorry about your eight-year-old niece. I don't know what it's like to lose a niece, however, I know what it feels like to lose someone close to you. I'll be glad to wait for you to update your story, if you want to continue it.

Your portrayals of the Disney characters- Facilier, Peter Pan, Genie- were absolutely perfect! I can't tell you how much it irks me to read fanfics where the characters act nothing like themselves. Awesome job!

This story screams Disney right from the get-go: an orphan girl with an affinity for storytelling (Maggie reminds me of Wendy so, so much), a wish on a star, that "once upon a time" introduction... This chapter has all of the elements of a classic Disney opening, which I love. I'm so excited to read on!

I'm sorry for your loss. The Bible promises that soon Jehovah will resurrect the dead. They will live forever here on Earth. Death will be gone forever. The Bible says at Rev 21:3,4 "And God will wipe out every tear from their eyes And death will be no more. Neither mourning, nor outcry, nor pain be anymore. The former things have passed away." You can see her again. If you want more you can go to . I hope you have a good weekend.:)

This story is really good. I hope you continue with it.

Oh! This is wonderful! They girl, Maggie, is cute and whitty! And you captured the characters well! Ugghh. But, how longs it been since you've updated? Oh, and you've published it 6 years ago! :( Oh, will you ever update it?

Yay belle's story is fixed

EPIC they're in Agrabah! Wait a sec, wonder what's different there?

I love this story so far, it's so original! Please update, soon!

So apparently I haven't reviewed this since you revamped it. FAIL, Sword. Fail.

I really like where you're going with this, where the villains don't just write "and then all the good guys died and I won" and instead are changing one or two little things to throw off the story, like Flynn's fear of heights. Of course Gaston would ban books, that would be just like him!

Very nice, keep it up! And now, off to design Maggie's new dress...

Now, they're getting somewhere :)

That means the next destination must be the Beast's castle!

I think I speak for everyone when I say: Gaaah! what happened?!

Is Maggie supposed to fix the stories into the correct timeline?

Awesome story! I love this story so much!

Why why why?! Poor Belle! She's one of my favorites! How can books be banned?! Banning books is like saying "I will ban happiness from the world. If I were Maggie, I would have just punched Gaston in the face right there and then. Then, I'd drab Belle to Beast's castle and force her to read Pride and Prejudice or that book from her movie with daring sword fights and princes in disguise. And also, I'd force Flynn to climb the tower.

Please update soon! And if you do get tired of the story, why don't you give it to someone who will continue it! Not me. I would ruin this story. But, please do update! I love this story so much!

Please continue! I love this idea of storyteller!

i love it.i want more chaps asap plz