I loved it!

This is so awesome I nearly cried when Dom didn't say anything.. :)

Thou shalt not listen to drunk people. This was cute!

Me knife that stupid drunk A very large court case which I shall win.

I hate when men say stuff like that to kel or alanna. Love your "one shot "

This is great ) Please write mire KelDom!

Sincerely,

~WarriorKnight~

awww...how cute!

:D

Great story. But Dom's family isn't in the book of silver, I think that in squire they mention that its in the book of gold. But other than that amazing oneshot.

Overused "favor". In the book with Raoul and Buri, it sounded like a matchmaking plan, when someone did it the FIRST time with Kel/Dom, it was all right.

Now, well, it seems like everyone's creativity evaporated.

So I was creeping your profile to find Twins, and noticed that even though I read this fic, I hadn’t reviewed it *gasps* shame on me. I think maybe I read it before I made an account. So here I am! It’s so funny and cute! I LOVE the idea of Dom taking her to a family gathering. Because of course NEAL will be there to make things awkward. Best line ever: “Gosh Kel. You sure do scrub up nice.” LOL. And I do love the hot stable scene… I love whenever Kel and Dom get together :D

good story but you should go thru & check spelling

this is so cute! there were some spelling errors. but the story flowed well and was attention grabbing the entire time... i'm surprised you only have five other reviews for this and i would really enjoy reading more of it... very nicely done.

realistically, if someone was run over by a horse and not expected to survive, wouldn't an invitation to a party just be ignored?

its very well written!

this is my favourite chapter!

but you need to improve your spelling