"Ike whistled as he examined the shredded armor that was so cleanly cut there were no stray shards of it." A few sentences ago you said Axel was hitting them with the blunt edges...

LOL AXEL'S A HAXOR.

Review for chapter 40:

Wait random sea monster what?

Ooh, ozone has a smell?

LOL BEN... Was he playing Risk?

"and he himself held his armored hands in front of his hands," Wait, what...?

Wow I really have like nothing to say. Can't believe I didn't read this for over a month... how'd that happen...

"Niko replied, as the green barrier surrounded him as well, and he took a step into the mist after Marth.

Ike held out a hand, the green barrier surrounding him as well." Eeps. Watch the repetition there.

"The black feathers were totally indistinguishable by now from the rest of the sky. By now it looked like they would disappear at any moment." Wow. This was the very next paragraph. Double "by now."

"No one had to tell him that he had stretched himself all the way to his very limits." You like your expressions, don't you ;) You've kind of overloaded this sentence with them; "stretched," "all the way," and "very limits" all imply that he's gone too far. One or two is good. You can tell yourself you're saving the third for later, in this situation.

"A shimmer of heat haze, a cascade of diamond dust, a jostle of stray electrons." YES. WOW. DANG. EPIC. WOW. AWESOMENESS IN A DESCRIPTION RIGHT THERE. And here comes your ego XD

"Axel toppled to the ground, not looking as though he was very far from death." Could be more impactful if less wordy.

"with a notable large barrel." Whoops. Notably?

"Axel leapt to his feet immediately, ignoring any bones that might have broken because he just was now that indifferent to pain, and prepared to fire another flare." I like the wording, it's really strong. If there was a way you could sort of set the bit about him being indifferent to pain apart from the rest of the sentence, the effect would be multiplied. Or separating it into two sentences or something, maybe.

WOW That's bad luck Axel's got. Of all the times to run into a Regice...

Oh. So Terra Senior is Pterra. I guess that makes it easier to figure out the difference, even if that makes her sound like a dinosaur XD

The thing with the headphones was perfect. About the memories. 'Nuff said :)

Nicely done :) I'm glad he's back, and the character development was awesome in this chapter. Definitely looking forward to what happens next X) I think your tendency to write uber-long sentences is the only thing really bringing you down at all. You can always split them into smaller ones with starker meanings. Otherwise FANTASTIC and see ya next chapter :D Or in the PMs. That too.

Lol lol lol!

I can't review the actual chapter because quote, "you have already reviewed this chapter." T_T

Miasma! Oh, that stuff! Oh... O_O That stuff was scary... I think I know what you're talking about when you say miasma, anyways... the stuff in the movie, right?

GWAHAHAHA WHAT THE HECK... Okay, so was the pokeball-disabling device totally original, or...? ;)

...aaand elemental resurrection is STILL super awesome. It would make such a cool video game :D Not sure you have to repeat the description every time, but...

...speaking of which, maybe I could draw that... hm.

"At least no one IMPORTANT was hurt." Well, jeez. Everyone else is offended XD

Yellow flute... yellow flute... (googles yellow flute) Confusion? OHHHH I SEE NOWWW. Haha, if it was me I'd have thrown a chesto berry at her face for fun.

WOWWWW Ben just turns the machine off in a second... aaahhh...

AND THEN HE PWNS! YEA GO BEN GO BEN GO BEN

Oh snap. This is where Sa- uh, Chris dies... Yay...

Well played. You really are making progress :D

So I actually have no idea why he's Chris still...

"He reached over to the clothes he wore them yesterday and plucked out a pair of gleaming blue and silver headphones."... Yeah, just sayin'. You also called the guy Golva kinda spontaneously.

Nice explanation of shadow, there. Better than the old one, I'd say :)

Alart? LOLOMG Aaahh...

"who X-Scissored the area her head was in a few seconds ago." Ow... I don't know what it's called... Past perfect tense, maybe? I use "perfect" tenses a lot, and while they annoy the crap out of me a lot of the time, it actually works pretty well in the right situations. I think it would fit better here, too. "Where her head had been." It shows the difference between past tense, which is what most of your story is in, and sort of the past tense OF the past tense... Does that make sense?

Whoaa... it's like a new story :O Will have to read it sometime XD

Funny as usual!

Ha ha ha very funny!

I really love this Fanfic!

The DSi XL Cipher Peon was very funny!

Pikachu's Falcon Punch had me and my friend laughing out our guts!

Awesome chappie!

Ha ha so much randomness!

Awesome chapter as always!

No doubt about it. THAT was close!

Sigh... Friends are a very amazing gift wouldn't you agree?