Reviews for The Structure of His Spontaneity
Gubefan1980 chapter 3 . 7/14/2014
Haha, faked him out with a fake orgasm. Dishwashing liquid. Don't think that's good for your hair. Very sexy. Man what an asshole alpha male. He out does Hotch in that respect. I'd love to have a session or ten with Reid. Like that he was a dominant here, although I prefer him as in the canon, a bit submissive. Looks CAN be deceiving but I like someone to take care of Reid, preferably Morgan since he's always had the care of others on his slender shoulders. Sexy story, but Morgan going out of his way to be an asshole. I usually don't mind him referring to Reid as 'boy' because he's younger than Morgan but here it seems a put down.
Gubefan1980 chapter 2 . 7/14/2014
Ahh yes Morgan has to be an asshole. Why is he there in the first place. Jerk. So, let's proceed and see if Morgan continues to be a jerk. Can't wait for the fun to begin esp what he didn't trust Reid's speed dial now he's being a shmuck. *sigh*
1sunfun chapter 3 . 2/19/2014
Nice.
Zebrastreifen chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
surprisingly authentic, although I'd never ever ever ever consider Reid a Dom! I like how much this story differs from "Home Demonstration", although the story line is basically the same!
The differences in Hotch's and Morgan's characters (composedstoic vs. -well, somewhat emotional and quick-tempered) are very well involved!
JoanIncarnate chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
morgan needs to RELAXXXX.
kaimenwolf chapter 3 . 9/1/2012
Dom Reid... a dream come true and you wrote him purrfectly!
UnDeanifiedMadness chapter 3 . 8/10/2012
Haha! Loved it!
WaywardWhedonite chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
This story NEEDS a sequel!
LynnAshe chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
I. Cannot believe this worked. Unexpected and good and in character.
theacefrost chapter 3 . 5/3/2011
Brilliance! Oh my god Reid! I loved that little feign orgasm he did. "Oh you mean like this." He says with no shame, pure brilliance! I loved it! Completely made me grin and I was so excited to see that Morgan was searching for something more than these sessions, more so for a relationship and getting his own dominance over little Reid into the mix. I'd be curious to read more on there development from this. Great story! Wonderfully written!
theacefrost chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Man Morgan cannot follow directions to save his libido! This is a great story. There are some errors in terms of paragraphing where some sentences are somehow entered into a new paragraph halfway through but quick editing will take care of those. Really great story, I can't wait to see how this plays out! Loved the conversation with Hotch!

~~Arra~~
theacefrost chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Ooo very interesting! I love the way Reid is going about this. He's such a smart one and this is definitely keeping me intrigued as to how this is all going to play out!
spaz-san chapter 3 . 11/28/2010
I'm loving this seires of stories! I especialy love the line "And for every one of his genius-class neurons that jumped up and down and screamed Danger-Will-Robinson! another three lay back and drawled, Damn, this is gonna be fun." it made my day. anyway thanks for a great story!
PinkHimeLacus chapter 3 . 7/29/2010
OMG SEXY! PLEASE LET THEM GET TOGETHER, SEXY REID/MORGAN! I would love to see Morgan in control though. Please more. This was so sexy and well written. Very nicely paced and funny. The ending was epic! Loved it so much. Thanks for sharing! - More Reid/Morgan stories please?
Hatsu-Kidamaru chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
hehe, please. This was wonderful, I think you should make another one explaining what he did to hotch, I'm terribly curious now.

With love,

Hatsu
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