Short yet sweet prologue

I liked it. Good job

Oh my gosh i forgot about Pipers fear. You just want to give her a hug

I love your story. The character's fears are really creative. Good job! Keep updating!

OH NO! UPDATE SOON! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO AERROW!

Awe! So Finn can get a girl after all. And all he had to do was be a little more mature. Update soon!

Who is the rightful owner? Talk about cliff-hanging. Keep writing, its going great so far.

Domiwick's greatest fear is cats? ... He and Ranma should do a support group.

(How Domiwick's Fear was started)

Young Domiwick: *Inside deep, dark hole* Finally, I shall dicover the lost city and will be made famous for it! But first! *Takes out a tuna sandwich* *About to eat it*

**Cats start swarming over him**

Y. Domi: AH!

(End)

XD Anyway, nice.

Whoa! So much for not fearing anything. This is getting real good so update soon!

The prologue sounded really interesting and it seemed like a good plot but the OCs from no-where totally threw me off- Why and how are they there? It doesn't say this is a sequel, so who are these characters?