This is a really good story, I usally can;t sit threw long ones! -

This story seems a lot like my story about Jessie, but sticking to the Anime a lot more! Great job. At the end, about the turning point, that interested me. Just a suggestion, you could write about that, or maybe I could.

This is a good fic you have here!

Love the way you've managed to link all of Jessie/James's history together; it all makes sense and it's nice to see someone who doesn't write Jessie as either the misunderstood saint, or as the nasty heartless villan.

The history with Cassidy also made a lot of sense.

In truth, I'd like to see a 2nd chapter to this; maybe something Rocketshippy ('cause I'm a sucker for the pairing) but the way you've written it is good enough the way it is.

Definetly a fic Jessie-fans should read.