in the end of the next chapter can you give a full description of monk guandao and a full description of anti avatar kahn? i have been trying to picture them for a while so i would appreciate it!

Good job once again, dear :)

Could the dark Jedi be a certain red-head by any chance ;P

But, wait, I can't believe I'm the only one who reads and reviews your work! This is wrong... it is really good, believe me :) I have seen stories with more typos and worse grammar get more interest out there...

Perhaps it's your chosen topic? Not many people seem interested in the post ROTJ stories anymore...

Anyway, keep it coming! It's good!

Love

Mireille

Really intriguing and well written, dear :) I'm hooked :)

More? :)

Love

Mireille

Interesting debut, great characterizations, and well written first part :)

Keep it up!