Oh man, ouch, I felt that in my bones. Poor Eli, talk about a double whammy. But what an excellent build up, his realization of unexpected feelings coming to light just before all his hopes are shattered - I'm floored! Great work!

Ok, not an Eli fan but I felt kinda sorry for him. He lost more than either Chloe, or doctor Rush he lost his dreams of what could/might be. To bad he hasn't realized what you want or need from the other person dose not mean you will ever get it.

great story!

Wow, great story! I actually wish there was more, see what happens later and stuff. Poor Eli

Oh wow. That was amazing. I was like "WHAT THE FUCK!" when you know what got revealed. Awesome story.

I have to admit the idea of a rush/chloe was kinda wierd for me but since Eli was the main character I had to check it out. I also have to say very depressing and I cried at the end...(i do that alot) Never the less I thought your story was written amazingly well and I enjoyed it the whole way through. I loved it so please keep up the great job!

Deuces

This was so sad for Eli in the end, it’s just good that he had T.J. there, whether he really wanted her there or not.