lol, that's great; and, I love how you don't just have her sing, but have the action during it. I could see her doing it all, too. Although, no malaprops; she probably has the song memorized, huh? :-) (Then again, we don't know how old she is; I like to tell their ages for people to picture them at times, but here it works better that we don't know.)

Check out my Peanuts stories if you haven't yet. You capture the characters really well.

This was hilarious! Everyone was well written and I was laughing throughout the story.

XD "I wonder who it was about," Linus never fails, does he? You did great with this one! Song fics are cute :D