So I read this fic once about two or three years ago. I loved it. I saved it to my bookmarks on my phone and everything (didn't have an account back then). I've changed phones three times since then and I've never stopped looking for this same story. I'm so glad I finally found. Automatically favorited it and I'm never forgetting the title OR the author just in case! Thank you for writing something so great that it inspired three years' worth of searching. I've never done that for any other story, not even published novels.

Omg. Its so hot :3 I love these two. And it's so well written too.. Thanks ! :3

Absolutely fabulous story.

This story was just incredible!

It is quite difficult for me to find words that do it justice, absolutely everything about it was just amazing!

Fantastic work :)

This story is really amazing. Your writing is beautiful, and I was very pleased not to find any mistakes in your grammar. You portrayed Balthier and Fran very well, and the plot and the scenes were great. In addition, I love your use of vocabulary (especially the reference to the primordial soup!).

I really liked this story,it was one:Well written, Two: Not PWP and Three: Characters were very well written. It was really cute, good job.

This is impeccable. Sexy, funny, (did I mention sexy?) and vividly painted.

Wonderful, sweet, and sexy. Your dialogue is very natural and in character; I had no trouble "hearing" their voice actors speak your lines. Your Fran feels a bit more relaxed and happy than I usually imagine her to be, but this is not a bad thing. She is not so girly and giddy that I find myself picturing Penelo in a bunny suit instead... although, that might be entertaining. Also, you really captured her earthiness and wisdom, her connection to the earth and Mist and emotion, not to mention wit and ability to keep up with Balthier.

Thanks for this, expertly done.

oh dear

i think that this is where the rabbits have learned something for saving their lives and will never stop using that knowledge

lol

So perfectly in character, with Fran's beautiful, strange way of speaking, and Balthier's defensive wit and vanity.

And heroism. And love.

I love stories that feel like a bit more canon just got added. Delicious X-rated canon, but still.

The rabbits were an amusing yet strangely plausible embellishment.

Also, I love it when someone captures the magic and spiritual perceptions of Fran or other magically-attuned characters.

This was simply amazing! I adore this pairing a lot and your story was so... hell so Balthfranish. I'm so happy that I've read it. Bloody hell, You've made my day. Thank You very much!

*and sorry for my English*

Beautiful, I do adore these two well written, the descriptions were lovely and really the scene, I enjoyed this one :)

This is just fantastic. Wonderful, vivid descriptions that really bring the writing to life. There is not one part of this that I didn't enjoy. Great work!

Everything about this story is absolutely sublime. The language used makes it impossible to not imagine what is going on, it sets the whole scene playing through. The combined romance from Balthier and Fran along with the humour from the rabbits wathching them makes it impossible to stop reading too!

Th sex scene was written wonderfully too, I could really get a sense of the longing going on between these two before it took place and during it.

I actually read this on my PSP at like... 5am becuase I couldn't sleep and my battery ran out midway through. I got up from my cozy warm bed to go downstairs to the freezing cold so I could get my charger just to read the end!

You really need more reviews, it's unreal.

Thanks for an amazing read! I really, really hope you write more of this pairing becuase you've got them spot on for me.

Thank you!

~ Deborah