This is the better version by far

... And that's how it shoulda ended!

I have to say that I like

this edition better then

the movie edition:)nice

job!

This is just perfect. You took so much about the movie and made its focus where it needs to be, keeping its feel and theme while adding to it immensely. Absolutely terrific!

Jo

awasome!

Simply wonderful :) I absolutely loved it. Great work!

This was adorable! And yes; the Lilly!Supergirl and Miley!LoisLane plot sounds like a great story. :)

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Another amazing story to add to your collection, lol. I loved it, and would have loved the movie to be this instead of what it was :). So many almost moments between Lilly and Miley before they finally kissed on that stage :). You really did a wonderful job of taking all those scenes from the movie and making them work with just Miley and Lilly. I love the graveyard scene, with Lilly being there for Miley, and Lilly's words were so sweet and touching :). So many of the lines that Miley said in the movie have so much more meaning and emotion to me when she is saying them to Lilly. I think the supergirl story idea sounds like fun, and I know you would do an awesome job with it. Thanks for putting in the time and effort to write this wonderful story. Keep up the good work.

Wonderful story! I agree with venz07, this should've happened in the movie, not with that stupid travis. Hope to see more of your work soon! Merry Christmas!

This is what should've happened in the movie!hehehe love it!

Wow! I really liked this! I hope to see more your stories soon! Merry Christmas!

Great Story! Just as good as my attemept to merge Kurrant's Lileyverse with the movie. Unforuantly, I can't seem to figure out how to get the mayor's dinner scene to work for my story. Because, Miley and Lilly are married in my story. But enough about my story. Yours was just wonderful. But, I was a little disappointed you didn't inclued the Hoedown Throwdown

Aww that was really good. I like it better than the movie. Good job.

That was a Great adaptation of the Hannah Movie with a Liley twist. I loved all the cute little Lilly and Miley moments. As for the idea with Lilly as Supergirl and Miley being Lois Laneish i could totally see that working. Cause Lilly could pull that role off. And Miley could totally be a lois lane. I do hope you try to make a story out of that idea. With reading your other stories so far it would be worth reading.