This is one of the fanfics I don't review in all the chapters because I'm dying to read the next chapter. I don't even know if you are still writing, or if you even still use this account, but I beg you to keep writing. Make more chapters. You are amazing and a sweet person. Even if you don't uptade it, I thank you for this wonderful story.

this story is so adorable i hope you continue it

Awesome, you spelled a few things wrong but thats no problem. It was very captivating, and makes me want to read more, and more. You are a very talented writer :)

;)) it's nice to read yin and hei together C; it's mainly misaki and hei which I think is boring and sucks :O update soon :D

omg I loved this!
Gives me a warm feeling A great job w

3 i love it, cant wait for more xx

I loved it! how long does it take to upload a chapter?

i hope that you update this.

please update! I love it!

Aww! That was so sweet of Hei!

Love Hei and Yin so much!

Hope you'll have another story coming up!

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Great story! Honestly, there isn't enough darker than black heixyin stories. Thanks for this great one and I hope you'll update one day!

great fic! plz update soon!

Quite the bold move we have here, since up until now I've seen Hei/Yin stories with no more than six chapters maximum, most of the others being one-shots and the like. Aside from that and a few minor mistakes here and there, the way you write is adequate. Though I would advise making Hei's character a little darker, give a more rough edge to his vocal actions, something that can show he's harsh but still cares. That's the impression he gave off in the anime, anyway. The dark tone of his voice when he spoke in his proffesional tone, the impassive way he seems to treat everyone, I just love heroes like that, people that may seem cold most of the time but do have a warm side to them. The best example of how I view Hei's Character would be the Second Season's OVA, which shows Hei and Yin being on the run. It was splendid, in my opinion.

If you keep writing, I might keep reviewing and urging you on The largest story I have ever seen was... 120 chapters, I think? Or 60, I'm not sure. And I'm talking about 60 chapters three times the size of these ones.

Anyways, good luck and have fun with thinking new stories up )

Kinda confusing, but doing well so far.