Some good writing in this fic. For me tho it moves far to quickly in certain parts and it’s almost hard to keep track of the characters emotions.

Nice little read tho!
Love a light/dark confused Luke

An interesting ride you took us on. Thanks for sharing. :)

I've gotta say, I'm thoroughly enjoying the conversations between Luke and Parck.

I loved it. Great story and well written as all your stories are. Be encouraged to keep writing, people still read stories even 8 years later. I liked the concept of the story, a kind of dark Luke, and I love Mara. I especially like it when they get together in the end, but I like to hear the struggles of the journey.

I thought that somewhere in there Mara would accuse of him of forcing her to witness the man she loved most become the man she despised most(Palpatine).

just read the whole thing , i really liked. great ending

thanks

nana lee

hey great chapter i love your story and if it possiable that luke probably would be a dark jedi like his father fall to the dark side or their is still hope for luke skywalker to be a good jedi for the light side of the force. great chapter big stars wars fan

very good.. i will continue to peruse your stories as often as i get a cnance..a bit too short but very entertaining

I find it hard to accept Thrawn's behaviour in the last few chapters. It just seems out of character.

Approve of the happy ending though.

Just went to your "don't click ths" page and went through all the dialogue boxes, laughing hysterically. Quite clever, really.

~In Restless Walks

Ok the reason I didn't leave a proper review last night was it was 2am, I'd just read your story and I was very tired. So here we go. It's 11:30pm and I'm in a much better frame of mind. ;)

I liked that very much. I think you did an interesting exploration of Luke's experience of the Dark Side. Interesting from the pov that he wasn't actually using the DS himself but having it cloud his mind. That btch must have had a lot of Force power to be bale to do that. Or have an incredibly light and subtle touch.

I struggle to see Thrawn wanting to help the NR, he prefered the Empire and it's structures. He seemed to dislike democracy a lot. But I guess if he felt that the NR could be built in a way that was beneficial to his mind, he'd be accepting.

I adored the relationship with all its twists between Mara and Luke. That was fascinating especially Mara acting all jealous and confusing everyone. :D

All in all, a great fic, and well worth my time. :D

Thank you!

It's finished! Great story!

Fantastic! Absolutely wonderful! I adored it.

(I'll be back tomorrow with a real review, but I thought you might like my initial thoughts :) )

Poor Kantasha is dead :(. But at least there was a cat fight! ;p

And it's good that Luke's name is finally cleared and he wasn't responsible for the man's death.

Great post! :)

While there is something to be said for a short story, I think this was wrapped up way too fast, not to mention the characters seemed to completely flip flop, thus making it hard to find them believable.

I like a jaded Luke, and I enjoyed your writing of him, however I don't believe he would be as easy to control as you make him in this story. However, I'm a crazy Luke fanatic.