Reviews for And If You Don't Love Me
admun00 chapter 5 . 3/15/2016
Lease continue!
TheGilbird chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOO!

NO UPDATES IN OVER A YEAR?! THIS IS MADNESS! THIS IS CRAZY!

THIS

IS

SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!/shot

I'm sorry, I couldn't resist. :D Now, UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I am now following :3
HAMBAHGAH chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
Update please! I beg of you! Update! *begging* If you don't... *pulls out rifle* I think you know what will happen. *smiles evily* Have a nice life...what little time remains of it. Or! *puts rifle away and smiles sweetly* You could just update! ... o.o ...I apologise if that sounded like a threat... .-.
TheObsessedWriter chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
This story is amazing and you really need to update! Try to finished the story instead of leaving me wondering whats to happen next!
MikkiHasACookieForYouD chapter 5 . 1/24/2012
omgomgomg! You HAVE to continue the story! I love it! pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaseeeeeee! with a cherry on top 3
Josie Audriguez chapter 5 . 10/31/2011
You have no idea how happy this made me.

Seriously, I have this thing fer Insane!america. You don't even know.

It's such a shame that there's not many Civil War Hetalia fics out there to crave my guilty pleasure of reading about America n his inner turmoil n stuff. ;w;

You have no idea how happy yer making me by writing this. Usually, I would say that I wouldn't want to rush you and you could take your time (so long as it's reasonable) to update, but I love this so much that I can't wait for the next chapter. I really hope that you haven't dropped this, because that would just kill me! This is a really good story and I just love it a whole lot.

So please, please, please, please update soon. I really want to read the next chapter and find out what happens next! ;W;)/

P.S: Love your writing style~
Maid of Light chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
This reads like a novel to me. I had so much fun reading it that I was actually upset a little when I realized you hadn't updated in awhile. Could you please finish this? It's too good not to finish, yet of course, I realize that writing isn't easy, so don't rush yourself. But still, finish this. :)

I appreciate that you review the history before writing too. Keep up the good work! I'll be sure to check and see if you update this!
History buff chapter 5 . 8/30/2011
Despite the USUK subplot, this story really has me ensnared. The dialogue is so gripping, I can't believe this is only on a fanfiction site. Historically, this version of the civil war makes more sense - Alfred being torn between both sides and not participating because to do so would be to abandon a part of himself.

Also, you get really deep into the underlying reasons for Alfred leaving Arthur, or America leaving England. Once again, despite the USUK (which I don't entirely disapprove of anyway), this is rather historically accurate. America wasn't being taken seriously, even though England was really doing what it though was best to protect and support America.

I hope that you will continue this story. I'll be sure to check up on it from time to time, and comment again later. Happy writing~
LCfan chapter 5 . 7/22/2011
I usually use a different name reviewing APH fics, but I'm using this one now so you'll know it's me lol.

I thought this fic was long dead, but since you started writing again, I'm just hoping there is a slim chance that you could continue this as well?

It's too good to give up on, you know?

But do what you like, because I know how much it sucks to continue something you really don't want to continue anymore.

Lots of love,

LC
AngleOfPureDarkness chapter 5 . 5/1/2011
this is an awesome story please update soon :)
Pineapplecat chapter 5 . 1/13/2011
Ooh! This is so good! I like how your depicting Alfred's struggles of the civil war. I hope you update soon!
anon chapter 5 . 8/17/2010
Wow, this is so intense.

Please update soon.

I can't wait to see what happens!
HoneyTwilight chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
Man, this is cool! :D Hallucination!America is really starting to get on my nerves, I don't like him... Awesome story~ :D
ThymePiece chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
Another cliff hanger? Whyyyyyy?

Please update soon.

I'd love to read more.
watchulla chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
Wow this is a good story pppplease never get writers block.

I need more!please.
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